I want to preface this by saying that I liked it a lot overall!
Probably because I might be masochist, I preferred the writing on the NTR route by a big margin. My favorite line in the game is probably when Lara cheers on Jack during strip poker. That being said, the best story of the 3 for me is definitely the NTS route. Very wholesome, and especially since you can choose Jack as the father, literally everyone is happy. Some of the differences between routes seem a bit arbitrary (like the protagonist switches aura or something) and some of the dialogue can be cheesy in this route, which hey, it works well enough for the game. So, kudos once again for the writing on the NTR route, I feel like you captured what makes it tick for people. Up until the big fight, I genuinely found very little not to love. I wish there was a way to not fight, such as ignoring every email or turning down Sarah. Still, it made up for it by being fun. I look forward to your future works!
Probably because I might be masochist, I preferred the writing on the NTR route by a big margin. My favorite line in the game is probably when Lara cheers on Jack during strip poker. That being said, the best story of the 3 for me is definitely the NTS route. Very wholesome, and especially since you can choose Jack as the father, literally everyone is happy. Some of the differences between routes seem a bit arbitrary (like the protagonist switches aura or something) and some of the dialogue can be cheesy in this route, which hey, it works well enough for the game. So, kudos once again for the writing on the NTR route, I feel like you captured what makes it tick for people. Up until the big fight, I genuinely found very little not to love. I wish there was a way to not fight, such as ignoring every email or turning down Sarah. Still, it made up for it by being fun. I look forward to your future works!