Every dumb selfish whore is de facto a "sharing partner," but no respectable sharing partner is a dumb selfish whore.
To avoid alienating a big slice of sharing genre readership, authors should heed the above fact. Throughout this story Anna says "oops I couldn't control myself" way more than "what do you want to do together," even when both approaches are open to her. Why? Most of the time Anna isn't even thinking of Dennis, he might as well not have a dick. Hard to blame her, because he makes my skin crawl. His presence and preferences during the action on any of the routes are irrelevant, but you'll get detailed broken English descriptions of his pathetic thoughts and emotions. This gets old quickly for readers looking for an empowered/realistic couple navigating a budding sharing relationship. Anna is just going around acting like a whore and being manipulated by gross men. Dennis happens to like it then two-pump jerks his crooked pencil dick after each scene. He talks about "cumming in my panties," loves to eat out Anna's uncleaned "red flower" that he "doesn't recognize anymore" after she's done fucking bulls, and she routinely kisses him right after gargling dick (initially without telling him - but he winds up loving it anyways because look at the guy). These aren't kinky and fun sharing scenarios, they're the thoughts and experiences of a coping beta cuck while engaged to a free agent slut in training.
Props to the dev for completing the VN with a few variable endings, and for their later works that show a ton of improvement, but this one isn't it.
To avoid alienating a big slice of sharing genre readership, authors should heed the above fact. Throughout this story Anna says "oops I couldn't control myself" way more than "what do you want to do together," even when both approaches are open to her. Why? Most of the time Anna isn't even thinking of Dennis, he might as well not have a dick. Hard to blame her, because he makes my skin crawl. His presence and preferences during the action on any of the routes are irrelevant, but you'll get detailed broken English descriptions of his pathetic thoughts and emotions. This gets old quickly for readers looking for an empowered/realistic couple navigating a budding sharing relationship. Anna is just going around acting like a whore and being manipulated by gross men. Dennis happens to like it then two-pump jerks his crooked pencil dick after each scene. He talks about "cumming in my panties," loves to eat out Anna's uncleaned "red flower" that he "doesn't recognize anymore" after she's done fucking bulls, and she routinely kisses him right after gargling dick (initially without telling him - but he winds up loving it anyways because look at the guy). These aren't kinky and fun sharing scenarios, they're the thoughts and experiences of a coping beta cuck while engaged to a free agent slut in training.
Props to the dev for completing the VN with a few variable endings, and for their later works that show a ton of improvement, but this one isn't it.