Others - Completed - Shattered Lands [v1.0] [Blue Eclipse]

[Rev @ v0.51]

Art's nice for the most part; there're a couple backgrounds that look placeholder-y and there's one image of the goblin gal that makes me worry Phil Foglio is gonna sue somebody.

Writing is good too; scenario's uncommon and novel, narrative is far better than I expected and voice is decent. Characterization can be a bit hamhanded (religious zealot is zealous) and the MC seems uncertain whether she's a domme freshly escaped from her dungeon or Destined Hero Of The Land #49.

Porn was alright. The very start of the game seems fixated on anal (both centaur scenes, one of the goblin scenes) which was a bit offputting since I clicked in for the other tags and anal's a personal turnoff. I also wish pregnancy mattered a bit more, even if it was something as simple as bonus xp.

TLDR: Didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did and it was a nice surprise.

Very nice game
The story is good
the art is good
the main character can transform into a futa
all the things that are planned are good and most of my kinks will be covered
it's definitely a game to try

This early in development, this game has a surprising amount to offer. There are, I believe, 20+ scenes, most involving the main character, but others focusing on the goblin barkeep. The scenes feel at times like they are drawn by different artists, which might be enough to throw some people off, with the stark difference in art styles.

The writing is passable, but not outwardly spectacular. The dialogue flows well, and carries proper emotional weight. One thing that did bother me is the relationship between the inkeeper, Ixsy, and Tiamat, the main character. Their relationship becomes intimate rather quickly, and doesn't have a lot of buildup. It's not a mood killer, but it's rather jarring, and the development could use some fleshing out.

My only current gripe is that the main character gets pregnant with, and gives birth to, eggs. Would really rather her have live pregnancies, but that's a personal gripe, rather than one that really detracts from the game.

Despite being so early in development, this game has a lot of promise, and I'm looking forward to seeing this game grow in scope.