Ren'Py Shattered Minds [v0.14] [eXtasy Games]

[rvlfycpydgdcttfren]

This my fist post and review in site. And it is great thing to say that Shattered Mind is the best porn game I have ever played. Frankly I must say; dominating, corrupting and rule women, breaking women's mind (espacially with mind control) is my fetish. And I must say; espeacially Elanor's final corruption scene was great example of this. Than let get to the review. I will try to explain game’s good side, positive things with missing sides, contents that need to improvement by articles.
And important warning! This review will be fully spoiler free.
Unfortunately game still has some missing sides. But I believe benefits of being early access state. Firstly I must say Landlord and Rommate was the best girls in this game. But I like every other character too. I even want to see more content about Elanor's friend. So, If we proceed to the review:
1- MC should have more bigger cock. Due to our huge BWC(Big White Cock) slaves and characters should praise our BWC.
2- We should have more activity with our slaves. And we should have special harem contents such as three-four-fivesoms with them. We should make threesome with the characters that we will choose. Threesome sex can be like Landlord and Roommate threesome.
3- We should able to corrupt every female character we see (Like Elanor's friend) and after fully corrupt Elanor and Sarah we see they talk about helping us for expanding our harem. I think it is great way to expand and add all the other character to our harem. Every slave should introduce their friends to us for turning their friend to our mind broken slave. For example; after fully corrupting Elanor, she could bring her friend (that we saw at the final test) to us for turn her mind broken slave too.
4- I think some of the character should be literally miserable and mind broken state before we fully corrupt and turn them into our slave just like happened in the Elanor’s final corruption scene. But it should be fit to their character and the relationship that we have with them. For example; we could put characters like Scarlet, Elanor's friend, Alice, Linda to the mind broken pathetic slave state. But we shouldn’t put characters like our landlord . Because their story is not fit in. But one thing is clear. And that is we should make action to fully dominate, disipline, rule whatever relationship we have with them.
5-
a)The art style, character designs, effects, menu/map design and background:
The art style is pretty good. Also shattering effects that we se through breaking girl’s minds are great. I can even say we need to see more shattering animations through events. Shattering effects are definitely raise the feeling of scene. Menu designs such as mind room’s and phone’s design are great. But the app icons could be more improved. Still, I liked the use of phone as center of menus. İf come to the character design, I have to say; I liked nearly every character’s design except Alice. Landlord, the girl at the gym with yellow and pink hair and Roommate are the best characters design for me. But I must say; we need redhead character as the sexiest character in the game. But I can’t say the same for fonts. Firstly game need better mind control voice fonts. Some words are unreadable thanks to the font. And even though I liked mind control effects I think they can be improve. But there is one thing that I can’t say even one good thing about. And it is backgrounds. Backgrounds look terrible, they don’t fit the artstyle. Because of this art style differences NPC look like pngies that put into the random images. And people on the backgrounds are even more bad than the background. And yes, only real bad things about this game is background.
b) Sex Animations:
Sex animations are good but need improvement. And sex animations leak variety. There should be more sex positions. Animations need more body movements throughout scene. Also after cumming in or on girls we should see that our cum leaks from their pussy or see the movement of cum on their body. And we should see more squirting and cumming from girls. Another sex animation problem is after turning girls mind broken slaves, most of their sex position’s look so similar and less unique. Harem’s mind broken slaves need more unique and special animations for each slave. For example; you could add fetishes to mind broken slave’s character. With this change, you could put unique and spacial animations for every mind broken slave with variety that provided due to mind broken slave’s fetishes.These would definitely great improvement.
6-I think story of this game is pretty good. And I even more like the plot twist. I must say; I relly curious about where that will lead the story. I think we just need to se more content about landlord and roommate.
7- The most importing missing point in the game due to great sexs throughout journey is more kinky, bdsm and maledom content that we should use to dominate, rule our slaves. For example; we can tie them and put vibrators pussy but denail their orgasm until they willing to give up their life for become to our slave. So, shortly I think gane definitely need more maledom, bdsm and kinky content that we can use to dominate, rule our slaves.
While slowly coming to review’s end I must say; thanks for reading this review.
I have written this review for developers to see missing points of game and contents that need improvement. I hope I could give ideas to the devolopers for make this game not just great, to make perfect. Because I really liked this game. And want o help with feedback. We should see more game like this that we control, dominate and rule women. Thanks to the devolopers for this great game.

To leave a review you need to click the stars. There's a second tab where you see reviews after. Though this ramble is loooooong by anyones review standards.. Also no, he doesn't need a huge im-insecure-compensating dick. Enough games have those (although they do typically pair with exaggerated saggy tits like this game has, so maybe you will get your wish).

 

[Batman Skywalker]

To leave a review you need to click the stars. There's a second tab where you see reviews after. Though this ramble is loooooong by anyones review standards.. Also no, he doesn't need a huge im-insecure-compensating dick. Enough games have those (although they do typically pair with exaggerated saggy tits like this game has, so maybe you will get your wish).

Yes, I saw reviews tab after posting this. Yes, it is long. But my biggest reason to wrote that review was to reach, support and help devolopers with my feedback.
Also, no. Having huge cock doesn't mean insecure compensating dick. İt is huge part of maledom tag. Because dominating and corrupting women is a thing made by mentally and physical superiorty in a maledom tag. And the biggest physical superiorty of men's body is cock in the maledom tag. This is huge part of maledom tag. I understand you don't see it necessary. But it doesn't mean BWC is not a part of maledom tag just because you don't see it necessary.

 

[Batman Skywalker]

Absolutely not. His cock is believable level of big and that's enough. No need for these ugly enormous monster cock we see in other VNs, thank you.

(Agree that the girls should still worship it more though)

I wrote that article due to my takes and the things that found mostly in maledom tags. Beacuse big cock is big part of maledom tag. Of course you can find it unnecessary but that doesn't mean it is not part of maledom tag. And yeah, girls really should worship our cock anyway.

 

[Kuirika]

Does anyone has save file from v0.11??

 

[kosan100]

Does anyone has save file from v0.11??

 

[PervyParadox]

I wrote that article due to my takes and the things that found mostly in maledom tags. Beacuse big cock is big part of maledom tag. Of course you can find it unnecessary but that doesn't mean it is not part of maledom tag. And yeah, girls really should worship our cock anyway.

Maledom just mean the guy is dominant. The kink is in the attitude of the guy towards the girls, it doesn't have anything to do with any of his physical trait. Sure it usually goes with the guy having at least a decent size. However, the size here is fine and, most importantly, believable. If we're going into psychoanalysis territory, the "physical dominance" is established through the girls NOT having a cock and every other guy we see naked having smaller cocks maybe. That is enough to add the freudian fetish of power = cock association without the need to make the guy a freaking orc. Bigger than normal, but believable, is enough. The monster cocks we find in some VNs are so ridiculously big this is just laughable and doesn't add anything to the fetish of domination. Some can tolerate it, for me it can ruin a scene (and I'm sure I'm not the only one).

Gotta love talking about the sizes of cocks in VNs on the internet

 

[Bronzescorpion]

We should able to corrupt every female character we see (Like Elanor's friend)

You are in luck. Not only is Eleanor's friend planned, currently she will be in the third update from now, unless something changes.

Edit: By the way, repeating Maledom tag over and over again does not make what you believe the tag is about to be true. Maledom is just male domination, nothing more, nothing less.

 

[Bronzescorpion]

Yes, I used the hotfix but it didn't change anything, I go to her office, talk to her but the corruption doesn't change

and in the OP it says that the hotfix is for fixing Problems with Alice's quests

There were two hotfixes close to each other, one for Alice, the other for Mary. But you seem to have a unique problem, since the Mary problem was about not being able to leave her office.

 

[harem.king]

I don't know why all the complaints about Mary.
The core girls already are in the harem, with a full route and breedable.

In terms of plot Mary is a priority because of her position of power.
Personally I thought it was fine that we got Mary now.

 

[Thargor]

Are there any requirements for the random events? I skipped forward many days and still none of them occured.

 

[Sh4dyW0lf]

Are there any requirements for the random events? I skipped forward many days and still none of them occured.

And you probably skipped right by a few . . .

For the start of each Morning / Noon / Evening segment, check the app on your phone that provides character locations - you'll notice things like Scarlett and Kobe are both in the 2nd classroom in the Morning, or Scarlett and Chloe in the locker room at Noon, or Chloe and Luna in the Art classroom. Go to these locations immediately - if you do anything else first, you miss the event.

 

[Assiemodis]

i'm stuck in the quest: Now Who's Boss (Mary)

i have Mary's corruption at 60, and i need to raise it to 70, but the only place i can see her is at the Dean's office and that don't raise the corruption
when i try to go to her home it says that i have to raise the corruption to continue
but that's the point, i don't know how to do that, how can i raise her corruption?

In her office when you talk to her there should be a option to corrupt her mind once your visceral is 15 or higher.
That is the only way to raise her corruption.
What does the option "corrupt her mind" say in your game?

 

[Gagagoug]

Stuck there, what to do?

 

[Assiemodis]

Try to see her after class in the computer lab.
Thats what it says under todo's for me.

 

[Bronzescorpion]

Are there any requirements for the random events? I skipped forward many days and still none of them occured.

Make sure none of the girls are staying at your home, if they are their events won't occur

Beach can happen on weekends - Morning and noon

All others are week days:

Sarah/Eleanor - noon and evening
Chloe/Scarlett - Morning and noon
Luna/Eleanor - noon and evening
Alice/Sarah - noon and evening
Alice/Luna - noon and evening
Kobe/Scarlett - noon
Chloe/Luna - Morning and noon

 

[sam61g]

Good evening, could anyone tell me if Bill's transformation into a woman is close?

 

[Borckan]

Android version plz with cheat ??

 

[TheCrimsonRevenger]

I created an incest patch for this one! This is an unofficial incest patch, and has no affiliation with eXtasy Games.

Copy the "game_changer.rpyc" file into the "game" folder of your game.
Enables to enter custom roles or to choose from different presets, including "mom" at the beginning of the game.

Why does it let me choose Sofia relationship but not Chloe?

 

[Bronzescorpion]

Good evening, could anyone tell me if Bill's transformation into a woman is close?

Planned to be update 0.15 so the second one from now

Why does it let me choose Sofia relationship but not Chloe?

Because they are tied together. Chloe automatically becomes you sister if Sofia is your mother

 

[rvlfycpydgdcttfren]

I wrote that article due to my takes and the things that found mostly in maledom tags. Beacuse big cock is big part of maledom tag. Of course you can find it unnecessary but that doesn't mean it is not part of maledom tag. And yeah, girls really should worship our cock anyway.

Seems extremely insecure if you can't be domineering without needing to rely on a cartoonish penis size, so my point stands