VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - She Is My Precious [Ep. 4] [Finest Art Productions]

Episode 1 review:

I think that you should rewrite the dialogue up until the girls you tutor arrives as it felt kinda awkward, but other than that I really love the game, it got me pretty emotional in the last 15 or so minutes too.

Decent sized episode too. Pretty sure it took me about a half hour or so to go through.

Very Nice,

A stunning beginning, I must say, really would have liked it a bit longer so will wait to see maybe by Ep 5 so I don't finish it in 5min again. But lots of plots to follow up on, stunning renders and really hope to see more

Really good. I mean.. I lacks content atm. But the story seems to be going into something deep and interesting. and come on.. the graphics are great.

Can't wait to see where this goes. Let's hope the dev ignores comments and just creates what he wants, not what he thinks people want. as you just can't please everybody.. Just stay true to your vision.