VN - Ren'Py - Short NTR Stories [v0.3.2] [LustfulFantasy]

Yo, lemme tell ya 'bout this game. Honestly, it ain't worth the hassle. First off, they threw in some seriously messed-up stuff without any heads-up. Like, seriously? Gimme a heads-up or at least a button to bounce outta there if it ain't my jam.
And don't even get me started on the story. It's thin, real thin. Just a bunch of adult scenes stitched together with no real glue. There's zero tension, no sense of "what's gonna happen next?" It's drier than a desert.
Plus, the characters? Forget about 'em. The main chick's got no personality, no real feel for who she is. Like, why should I care about her at all? And the dude? Same deal. No cool backstory, nothing to make you feel for the guy. You just kinda… there.
Honestly, the whole thing feels like a bunch of random clips rather than an actual story you can get into. There's no logic holding it together, which makes it a total pain to keep paying attention. It's a real shame, 'cause it could've been somethin' more, but it just falls flat. Feels like they just crammed in the raunchy bits without thinkin' 'bout the rest.

This is good but it gets 2 stars instead of 4 (the maximum I could give to a kinetic novel) because of the forced gay scene. I know that there are people that want to see it, and I don't have a problem with its existence, but there could be a warning and a "skip scene" button for those that don't find it erotic. I hope this changes and I will revise my review if it happens...

As someone who has played the developer's previous games, I was already a big fan. In this game, while we shape the story to some extent, we’re essentially following a pre-written narrative. However, the developer is truly masterful in crafting the story. Especially for those who grew up in or are familiar with West Asian and Far Eastern cultures, there are plenty of incredibly captivating details.
Due to the game’s style, there aren’t many negatives I can point out since it’s primarily a storytelling, visual novel experience.
Pros:

• Character designs
• Story
• Very smooth transitions

Cons:

• Graphics could be improved

My score: 5 out of 5. Wishing continued success to the talented "LustfulFantasy"!

holy fuck, the writing is so good.

it goes deeper into the dirty sides of cucking - power dynamics of family, bisexuality, masculinity.

i absolutely LOVED the first one. i wished they went a little farther with the storyline, i thought the family dynamics, family traditions, and how they were twisted against mc's favor was sooooo hot.

also, hijabi +1

homewrecking was not my taste tho. i felt like the jump into the "scene" was a bit rushed for my liking, but i suppose some people might like that.

hoping for more twisted family traditions and cuckoldry!

My Rating for Version 0.2 is:

Pros:
-Fantastic renders
-Great Short Stories
- Lots of different Scenes
- Hot Scenes
- Different Potions
- No Blue Balling
- Hot Animations

Cons:
-Nothing

Info:
Great Release and with Completed Story that doesn't go On & On ,with great HOT scenes without a boring minute, I just wish there where more of these Games out there, The Renders are done very Good with Great closeups, also there is also Drama and Homosexuell scenes inside also, which gives folks with different tastes something to look forward to.
The characters are of different Ages that also Spices up the Game.
And also the Animation is Fantastic, like watching a Movie.
Conclusion:
All in All a very Good Release that is worth of my Support, hope there will be more where this came from.
Love it.....
A nice game with Sex, and a nicely told story to go with it.
Worth the download in my book.

Unfortunately, this game seems to focus solely on adult content without much substance. There is a lack of meaningful choices, which leaves the player with little agency or engagement in the story. Relationships that could have added depth to the experience feel shallow and underdeveloped. The tension that could have made the narrative more engaging is completely absent, and the lack of logic in the plot makes it difficult to stay invested.

Additionally, both the female and male protagonists suffer from poor characterization. The female protagonist lacks depth, personality, and a sense of belonging, making it difficult to care about her journey. Likewise, the male protagonist lacks a compelling personality or backstory that can draw the player in and create emotional engagement. Without meaningful context or development for the characters, the game fails to provide a true connection with its audience.

Ultimately, the game feels more like a series of disconnected adult scenes than a well-crafted narrative, leaving much to be desired in terms of story, character development, and overall depth.

A short ntr story and a short ntr story it is! Renders are nice, the female model is alluring and animations are smooth. A VN with a simple straightforward ntr story seems to be how the serie will go on if the dev keeps making more.

Short and sweet, just as the title suggests.

I appreciate that the dev gave the female love interest some personality - it made it hotter as she was more corrupted.

The graphics were solid though I think there’s room for improvement, specifically the indoor lighting. I see spotlights used but the shape should be rectangle or disk to make the shadows softer.

I agree with the other reviewer that the breasts were odd shaped. I’d suggest trying Zev0’s Breast Control which can help move and rotate breasts to realistic angles.

The story was interesting and progressed as realistically as one could hope considering it is a “short story”. I look forward to more from the dev, particularly interested to see any concepts from outside the middle east.

Hijab NTR LETS GO!

Ok, so the premise and the story is pretty good. I can do without the noises to be honest. Maybe add more women in the MC's life like his mom/sister/aunt/ or even a GILF(avoidable for those not interested of course)
And maybe have some hidden sex as well such as fucking behind doors/curtains/on a phone call/ in a packed subway or bus etc..
But overall a good start

The name says it all - Short NTR Stories, and it's a short NTR story (singular.) If unfamiliar with the Dev's work, try Life in the Middle East. He plays to Mid-Eastern tropes - male domination, female submission etc. It is quite effective.

In this particular story, there is an attractive young virgin, with ridiculous boobs, and a submissive male as a husband. They are newlywed and as supposed custom, the groom's uncle supervises their wedding night (I don't know if this is an actual custom or not - if so...disturbing.) As per his formula, the Dev introduces a dominant male - the uncle. What follows is a mix of cuck and netorare. I won't give away the details, but you can guess.

Overall, if this is your thing - it is a good, short story. The renders are decent, the LI attractive in a non-western sense (although the boobs are oddly shaped), animation solid and the sex positions anything but vanilla. I give it four stars because I am a tough grader. Subjectively, I would've liked non weirdly shaped torpedo boobs and her getting taken on all fours...again, subjective. If you found this titillating, check out his earlier work mentioned above. Very similar themes with an even more attractive female MC - also it's a VN with choices and more of a buildup. I encourage the Dev to continue his works because they are something different and he does have above-average talent.

My hand was literally vibrating over the mouse at that one point, shaking so badly I could barely push myself to go forward.

The only way this could have been better is if it was trimmed down to its high points. There was an unnecessary cooldown there with repeating thoughts and themes during the scene. It dulled the tension that was so intense and it took me out of the headspace temporarily and it was quite underwhelming.

Repetition and stretching are fine but not when the point is to be short and strong.

Not that I'm complaining though—I'm writing this and I'm still tingling.

Fuck me that was good.