VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Sibling Primacy [v0.3] [PY Studios]

After V0.3
Models 3/5 All the models are fairly decent. The brother is a steroid ridden muscle bound bulk, which really isn't my cup of tea.
Renders 2/5 Yes, far better than I could do, but there are many better out there.
Story 1/5 In a world of erotic fiction this is well and truly a pornographic story. The story opens with the death of a grandpa which the mother has to attend to. She therefore sends her 18 year old daughter, who hasn't finished summer school which is needed for her to graduate, to be looked after by her brother in Spain. The story goes to great lengths to tell us how much the mother hates the son due to his connection with the porn industry. Brother wants to screw all the women, sister wants to screw the brother, brother feels guilty about looking at his sister as a target, but does it all the same. The first actual scene is with a teacher getting work for the sister to do to graduate, before screwing said teacher who is also going to join them in Spain.
Sex scenes 0/5 - really they are about 2/3 frames with the thinnest of build up, no foreplay, the couple of frames for the sex and no post coital/after care
At the end of v0.3 the mother has just joined them (even though she is still not on speaking terms with the son. However the daughter and one of his staff turn her round on the trip from the airport. Now, she doesn't seem uncomfortable spending time on a boat with bunch of ex porn stars all talking about walking around naked.
This could have been a good candidate for a fapper, but the sex scenes do nothing.
It could have been a different spin on an incest story, but there is no internal logic holding together.

Ill start off by saying that I really like the two main characters, especially the quality of their models, although I will say there are a couple of female models that look a little manly in the facial area, which could need some adjustments at some point if possible.

The story at the time of this review is alright (but story isn't the main focus of a pornographic game in my opinion), the scenes for the game are really well posed and planned, but the animated ones still have room for improvement (I would suggest dropping them in favor of more still scenes if they're causing too much of a problem).

The creators consideration and commitment of adding a good diversity of fetishes is ambitious and commendable, this is where the game seems to shine most for me, and I'm assuming English isn't the creators native language, if that's true, then maybe he should consider trying to bring on an English proofreader to help out with dialogue.

Overall I would say the game has a lot of potential considering it's the creators first game and how early in development it is. Keep up the great work!

the artwork is ok,and I would increase the texture to some degrees it's kind of grainy. the models are sexy except the lena heady look alike. it's good that your scenes are animated,but they need some work. hopefully the longer you work on this game the more they'll improve. the sex scenes are pretty damn good for your 1st attempt at making this type of game. i'm not expecting a great story story in a porn game;but you should really hire a native English speaker to go over your game,and edit it. overall i give this game 3 stars,and hopefully you can make improvements on the things I mentioned to make your game even better.

Action from within mins into game and it does not stop there or with just 1 or 2 characters in the game. The story could be better but its a new game starting out so will have to see if it improves. The girls are all hot except Liv she looks a little manly. A definite game to watch.

I would recommend it to those which like to play bad games. Bad in a sense, that it has cheap plot, cheap humour, cheap relationship, rich douche with big dick and sister which wants to ride him.. there is almost no depth to those characters. In games, especially erotic games I expect two things to make me enjoy it. One is good art and second is good plot. To make a game enjoyable ride I need at least one of those. This game has neither. So.. if you are starting with erotic games. You will enjoy it and call it a masterpiece, I understand you. I was in your shoes and played cheap games with even cheaper plot and I enjoyed them. Before I tried more and more games. I started to understand that what I liked was worse than crap. It is a good position for those of you who need to see tits and ass early into the game. Do not expect super game out of it. It will never be but it can be good if some more work is put into it.

The story is too slow, the characters are ridiculous. I love disproportion of bodies, but these characters do not make me dream. I do not understand the story, there is no multiple choice, it is much too linear.

i only dl the game bc i saw the pic of the dragon queen but could not find the scene after playing the game over and over. so i finally go to the dev wesite and see hes about to release a update so i can hardly wait for it to come out. other than that it was very good for early release. very good graphic and sound. a nice change from small kids playing the main character.

it had everything i'm looking forward to, to make me exited big muled dick male character that woman just turn sluts for, its just a demo and we already get to see sex scene no cock teasing hear. if u are a fan of this genre you will be just as pleasantly surprised as i am and look forward to seeing more up dates from this game and more from this dev.

Review version 0.09

Art 4/10: Models per se are good, maybe a little grainy. But the backgrounds are really empty and shallow. My bigger concern about the art in general are those big head shots that keeps hoovering with the same expression for the whole dialogs, looks like a rushed thing that is worth of a proof of concept not a demo.

Story 2/10: Basically is the story of Nacho Vidal with the money cheating mode who wants to bang his sister.. and every pussy who walks near him. The scenes are completely disconnected between each other & sometimes the scene itself doesn't make much sense.

Sound 4/10: The game start with the random death of granpa and we have the background music that resemble that of the ice-cream truck, Really? There are a couple of sister voicing about what she is saying that are kind of nice and i appreciated that

Overall 2/10:Beside that sister model and the voicing there is really nothing that can be saved IMO. The game is not a demo but just a proof of concept or version 0.0.0.0.0.1. It need a lot of writing to fix the holes in the story and a lot of render to make character feelings and emotions flows with the story ( the sex scene is really just 2 renders with 2 texts "fuck me" "i'm cumming", that's it!). the fact that the dev made a review on self project and hid part of the "demo" content under paywall are a big turn down but were not a weigh during the review. There is a still a lot of road ahead for this dev just to release the real demo.. good luck on that