Sorry to say, I did not find it in the game. Buying an orphanage instead of adopting girls? Were there only four almost adult girls in the orphanage?
She bought an orphanage because she didn't meet the criteria to adopt. Is it unbelievable for someone who has so much money to use it to achieve his goal?
Were there only four almost adult girls in the orphanage?
That there were only 4 girls it's only your guess. In the story I say that with 4 girls they got closer.
Who would transfer shares worth more than billion dollars to girls who are ‘almost like family’, in order to involve them in HR activities and planning?
A parent to his children. I have mentioned many times that Maraya sees them as daughters.
And who would sit at a table in a restaurant without pants? And so on, and so on…
Here I have to admit that I have made a scenario discount in order to accommodate the type of game.
The world of business is depicted in such a way that that at some points I have suspected that it’s a parody and not a serious game. But it is not the intention of the author, I guess.
Yes, it’s not my intention. But I don’t understand what points you are referring to?
Just one example: ‘negotiations’, where the value of the fashion company is mentioned to be USD 6.4 billion (Apple or Amazon are certainly envious).
Nike: 42.5b
Louis Viton: 36.4b
Chanel: 25.2b
Yes, they are envious.
The 'negotiations' and the discussion about valuation are so absurd that it’s even funny.
It’s not my best dialogue. I simplify some terms and how it is in the real world so it can be understandable. But please explain, make us all laugh.
Almost as funny as a move from fashion industry to nuclear energy or changing laws overnight (in fact, at night
).
No law changed?! How do you assume that?
Why is it funny? Goerge seems to know more information about the situation in the nuclear industry and wants to help Maraya to make profit. You can see that at scene 07 and scene 13. Btw Maraya is not only into the fashion business, she has many companies.
As somebody mentioned earlier in this thread, porn games need not to be like The Lord of the Rings in terms of a plot and writing. Especially, if one expects first of all nice renders with not-that-nice (kinky, dominant) girls. However, I expect a bit more: in addition to interesting renders and animations, I prefer a story that makes some sense and need believable characters I could identify with.
What you choose to identify with is your decision, but that doesn’t make the characters unbelievable. It’s perfectly fine if you don’t like the world in which the story takes place, but that doesn’t makes the story bad.
No offence - but IMO the game seems to be not for the folks who care for the plot or good dialogues.
No offense, but I find your review lacking in factual support. It seems to be more opinion-based than objective, with little explanation or evidence to back your claims. The explanations you do provide appear speculative and don't hold up under scrutiny.
P.S. If you agree with the guy that wrote “porn games need not to be like The Lord of the Rings in terms of a plot and writing”, why did you tried to engage and analyze in such depth my writing?