First and foremost, I must say that this is one of the best AVNs about incest out there, if not the best. The world-building is neatly done, neither too much nor too little, which makes it easier to read and immerse oneself in.
I've followed the game since it was first uploaded here, I've watched its evolution, and I must say the dev has learned well how to improve the quality. Your choice to use less narration and let the scenes speak for themselves is often overlooked. The visuals have gotten better with each update, even when it first came out, the visuals were already better than most AVNs using HS2. Lighting in porn does 60% of the job, if not more.
The dialogue and narration are well written, it's easy to become immersed in it. Your choice to use different font colors for each character is appreciated, no need to sometimes re-read the text because of a brain fart.
The scenery is great, especially during dialogues, the POV or camera changes make it immersive.
Although for immersion I must admit that music and ambient sounds play an important part, I've played my fair share of AVNs before, I've had the pleasure of playing some good ones, but often they lack music, or it's just generic music that doesn't accompany the reader in what's unfolding, unlike what you did in many scenes, for example when Erik and Lyna kiss for the first time.
The pacing is well maintained. I have to be honest, waiting for Erik and Lyna's first time was hard lol, but like I said, the build-up toward that taboo is very well done. It's not some bullshit where you just raise affection meters and fuck, or wait for the update to fuck your sis because you have to fuck all the other girls first.
As for the sex scenes themselves, they are grandiose to say the least. The narration is again very well done in emphasizing the taboo, and the animations are top-notch for a solo dev.
Now about the AI, I'm glad someone finally used it correctly. Still... I have keen eyes and find it easy to spot AI "burps," shall I say. In my opinion, the best scenes are when Lyna and Helga kiss, I saw that tongue merging, but overall it's the least otherworldly of all. The only animations that truly bothered me were the ones with the hands, they feel too uncanny, especially the fingernails and the skin. But other than that, if you don't focus on it, it adds some immersion. I would recommend finding a way to fix the hands mostly, and also make the animation loops better.
I just want to add a little thing, but finally having a male protagonist with a normal dick size instead of an absurdly large dick, is appreciated.
So I give it a 4.5 stars objectively.
Okay, that was my objective opinion. I hope I kept my subjectivity on a leash enough, but now subjectively speaking, I still like the game because the writing is damn good. Although the sex and story have taken a turn into a more "hardcore/depravity" setting, shall I say, I'm more of a lovey-dovey moron.
I don't like that, but it's purely subjective and doesn't take away from the overall quality.
With that in mind, I would subjectively give it 3.5 stars, because even I can't deny how good the writing is, which still puts it in my top 5 AVNs nonetheless.
In any case, I wish you good luck with your AVN, I'll still keep an eye for updates.
I've followed the game since it was first uploaded here, I've watched its evolution, and I must say the dev has learned well how to improve the quality. Your choice to use less narration and let the scenes speak for themselves is often overlooked. The visuals have gotten better with each update, even when it first came out, the visuals were already better than most AVNs using HS2. Lighting in porn does 60% of the job, if not more.
The dialogue and narration are well written, it's easy to become immersed in it. Your choice to use different font colors for each character is appreciated, no need to sometimes re-read the text because of a brain fart.
The scenery is great, especially during dialogues, the POV or camera changes make it immersive.
Although for immersion I must admit that music and ambient sounds play an important part, I've played my fair share of AVNs before, I've had the pleasure of playing some good ones, but often they lack music, or it's just generic music that doesn't accompany the reader in what's unfolding, unlike what you did in many scenes, for example when Erik and Lyna kiss for the first time.
The pacing is well maintained. I have to be honest, waiting for Erik and Lyna's first time was hard lol, but like I said, the build-up toward that taboo is very well done. It's not some bullshit where you just raise affection meters and fuck, or wait for the update to fuck your sis because you have to fuck all the other girls first.
As for the sex scenes themselves, they are grandiose to say the least. The narration is again very well done in emphasizing the taboo, and the animations are top-notch for a solo dev.
Now about the AI, I'm glad someone finally used it correctly. Still... I have keen eyes and find it easy to spot AI "burps," shall I say. In my opinion, the best scenes are when Lyna and Helga kiss, I saw that tongue merging, but overall it's the least otherworldly of all. The only animations that truly bothered me were the ones with the hands, they feel too uncanny, especially the fingernails and the skin. But other than that, if you don't focus on it, it adds some immersion. I would recommend finding a way to fix the hands mostly, and also make the animation loops better.
I just want to add a little thing, but finally having a male protagonist with a normal dick size instead of an absurdly large dick, is appreciated.
So I give it a 4.5 stars objectively.
Okay, that was my objective opinion. I hope I kept my subjectivity on a leash enough, but now subjectively speaking, I still like the game because the writing is damn good. Although the sex and story have taken a turn into a more "hardcore/depravity" setting, shall I say, I'm more of a lovey-dovey moron.
I don't like that, but it's purely subjective and doesn't take away from the overall quality.
With that in mind, I would subjectively give it 3.5 stars, because even I can't deny how good the writing is, which still puts it in my top 5 AVNs nonetheless.
In any case, I wish you good luck with your AVN, I'll still keep an eye for updates.
