VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch.3.3] [Ruykiru]

[Kulman]

A very small part of me wants to download this just to see what is in the rar file. But I shall refrain it's either gay porn or the mighty Rick for most of these anyway.

Its what your heart desires

 

[Johnjacky]

A very small part of me wants to download this just to see what is in the rar file. But I shall refrain it's either gay porn or the mighty Rick for most of these anyway.

He's a real one for never giving us up or letting us down.

 

[x4th]

Gofile

Here you go

Bro, give to people 3.5, already)

 

[stefu85]

He's a real one for never giving us up or letting us down.

you know the rules, and so do i

 

[IMhahahe5034]

Just wait a week and a bit, thats all

 

[MacLovin']

When this is finished Imma replay the entire game and have the biggest nut ever

 

[lucathesaint]

Bro, give to people 3.5, already)

can we out the 3.6, it's been too long

 

[Johnjacky]

When this is finished Imma replay the entire game and have the biggest nut ever

Just donate to the sperm bank my dude.

 

[Ruykiru]

When this is finished Imma replay the entire game and have the biggest nut ever

You will be edging for days unless you use the skip key

I don't know what you guys think of the length so far, if there's too much text or not, but I personally think there's a good balance between renders and dialogue. Sometimes it may get too much, but I simply love long h-scenes with lots of dirty talk, and also the many internal thought monologues where the toughest moral battles are fought...

 

[aslop]

You will be edging for days unless you use the skip key

I don't know what you guys think of the length so far, if there's too much text or not, but I personally think there's a good balance between renders and dialogue. Sometimes it may get too much, but I simply love long h-scenes with lots of dirty talk, and also the many internal thought monologues where the toughest moral battles are fought...

The more, the better!
For me, it's the core feature of VNs: you can find muted, soulless dolls in any animation pack, but only VNs can give you more or less good characters.

 

[stefu85]

right, enhance realism with a lot of inner monologue and talk, like in reality, not in porn....

 

[Johnjacky]

You will be edging for days unless you use the skip key

I don't know what you guys think of the length so far, if there's too much text or not, but I personally think there's a good balance between renders and dialogue. Sometimes it may get too much, but I simply love long h-scenes with lots of dirty talk, and also the many internal thought monologues where the toughest moral battles are fought...

DO NOT cut down the dialogue in the future. Dirty/taboo talk is the soul of this novel, and I'd go all Liam Neeson on you if something happens to that.

 

[MacLovin']

You will be edging for days unless you use the skip key

I don't know what you guys think of the length so far, if there's too much text or not, but I personally think there's a good balance between renders and dialogue. Sometimes it may get too much, but I simply love long h-scenes with lots of dirty talk, and also the many internal thought monologues where the toughest moral battles are fought...

Haha but I love edging so no problem
I would say maybe the dirty talk is amazing, and the internal monologues were a little long as I remember them but also I haven’t played it since you reworked the text so maybe it’s shorter now?

 

[Ruykiru]

Haha but I love edging so no problem
I would say maybe the dirty talk is amazing, and the internal monologues were a little long as I remember them but also I haven’t played it since you reworked the text so maybe it’s shorter now?

Been a while but I think sometime around chapter 2 I got rid of a good chunk of narrator lines and focuses more on "show, don't tell"