VN - Ren'Py - Siren Song [v0.2.0] [Jonesy]

I love this slowburn, strong story driven VN. The daughter is hot but almost ordinary and that is important to me.
I still cant understand why it is so hard to make pussy look real. Thats my only complain, but this story is far from the only one.
Looking forward to see how the story develops with the big haired girl and the twins (not so attractive thou).

Nice romantic story.

Good models.

Good art.

Decent music.

One of few games where the story isn't gibberish but instead excellent.

I'm not a fan of kinetic novels usually as I would not call them "games" but rather stories, however in this novel the story is laid out well and I don't think choices are needed. Can't wait for more.

TL;DR: If you don't mind vanilla romance incest story (hopefully with some harem later), this is a jewel for you. (A bit of cute lesbian action too, rather sexy IMO).

The story is very erotic, romantic and captivating.

All the significant characters are attractive and interesting.

Dialogs are pretty much perfect.

Models are cute, especially that sunny girl Willow. The main girl is the same model that we saw in other games by Jonesy. I could think of a few things to improve it, like more detailed freckles, but it's still nice and cute.

Music is quite pleasant. That's unfortunately rare in AVNs that none of the tracks are noisy or monotonous or for some other reason irritating. Here sound is gentle and works very well for the story.

Renders and visuals are of good quality.

20/20 without any doubt.

PS. A reviewer said that the girl passed from hatred to love too abruptly, and it's not believable. I'd say, yeah, some Shakespeare would describe that scene as more veritable, with more details and mastery. But even though Jonesy was not on par with Shakespeare there, it's not really unbelievable. First of all, that was not hatred. Rather, fear of abandonment and possibly a bit of jealousy. Love was already there, with the need to be loved back. So perhaps not perfectly shown, but rather veritable scene it is.

[v0.2]

It's a kinetic novel so no player freedom, which puts more focus on the writing.

The writing isn't bad, it's not engrish which is good, but the storytelling is pretty bad in my book. The problem is the daughter goes from hating him to desperately trying to fuck him in about 4 seconds. She also seems to act half her age and have no self control, which just isn't believable.

The MC is suuuuper cringy, he's the lame acquaintance people dont invite to things because he always ruins the afterparty with the guitar he's fooled himself into thinking impresses girls but really just brings the mood down

The renders are fairly good at times, but bad at other times, for example when wet

v0.1.1

I'm honestly blown away. I don't do reviews for games just starting out(its not fair to devs) but for this VN i just had to because it was masterfully crafted.

Comparing this to dev's other series, this VN is leaps better. Dev's other game series is the generic incest harem builder. Siren Song though, is a beautiful romance film.

The narrative is superb, its organic and heartfelt. An emotionally absorbing story played out by a stellar cast. Characters look stunning or more accurately fitting and they feel real in their personalities, their mannerisms. There's chemistry between them. Helps a lot with the melodious music that compliments the scenes(don't turn off the music, it sets the atmosphere for the scenes). The tone of writing is very personal while pacing is perfect.

I'm curious about how the other characters, especially the estranged wife, will play into the story. The mending relationship and blooming romance with Charlotte is picture perfect but other women jumping in on the wagon might break the magic. Will there be rekindling of the romance with the wife? Afterall, she fell for her husband the same way her daughter did.

Dev should dump the other series and go all in on this one(kidding, his other works are really good too). It is that good, a masterpiece. And its just the first chapter. Which can be a good or bad thing as pilot episode's primary purpose is to impress, thats where most of the creativity juices, budget and production value goes to. Having said that, i'm hopefully that dev can maintain that level of quality in the storytelling & production.

I can't wait for chapter 2!!! This is so mega good! I love Charlotte! And i love this story! I love his daughter, she is cute and little! She can be shy ... i like that! She loves her dad. They worked so hard for this. It will be possibly one of the best NSFW game ever! It don't need always sex. I love good story and a emotional story. I have even a feeling to protect her too! Good job for making this! It have a great potential! Can't wait for Chapter 2!

The writing, the characters, the mood are all fantastic. The relationship with the MC and his daughter is well done. The music even feels like another character in story. It's still pretty early but for the first chapter it's really well done and I look forward to following this. It's still early but this feels like Jonesy's best work yet.

The only bad thing about this game is how short it is right now. The relationship between the MC and Charlotte really gets to you and makes sense the way she feels. Didn't even really care that there's not really anything "adult" about this AVN yet. If I had to find anything negative I'd say there are a few times where the music volume is a little too low but given how cranked some other games have it, that's a reach. Definitely looking forward to more of this game and absolutely recommend it, but maybe recommend waiting a little while until there's more of it.

A very good start to a hopefully really nice KN about a father and daughter connecting while he's on tour and she's forced to tag along. The characters are all nicely designed, the premise of the plot works (mostly, she's almost 18 - she could probably stay home alone) and the renders are good. But the writing is what I think the dev has improved the most compared to earlier efforts. Conversations and scenes flow better and sound fairly natural to my non-English ear.
As with any incest game agency and who initiates things in the relationship is always difficult to portray in an entirely believable way, especially for a game that's not just about getting you off, but actually trying to tell a story. It mostly succeeds here, not entirely, and especially towards the end felt a bit contrived and rushed.
But it's definitely a story I will keep my eyes on and follow with interest.

What a great start so far. Having some Melody flash backs but now with your cute little daughter. Progres with corrupting the daughter has been going fairly quick, maybe a bit too quick.
Still can't wait for more content