VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sister Wants to Help [Final] [InkandTease]

Not only is it really short (basically just a scene), but it's not even an interesting short story. Just the script of a bad porn scene. The renders are decent, that's sure, but the animations either I skipped them out of meh with the whole thing, or they were never there. Can't say to be honest. There is no sound at all, like there is no real characters in the story. At least there are no bugs either, which is always good.

But in general, even with the fact that you can play it here free, it's probably not worth it. Your time must be more valuable than that, or at least the energy spent on downloading it. Or something.

I liked it...



The story becomes a little wonky, but it works. I've been going through the short stories and I like the core narrative. Animation and characters is great in this one. I guess my main issue is the rush the characters seem to be in at some point.

Very good over all, keep ir up!

V.complete

another VN that is more short story, with emphasis on 'short' making the VN tag pointlessly named. so if you have found this through the search engine by tags and expect a novel? forget it

at least this one has the names correct. a ridiculous opening writing wise and quickly the writer loses control and just spills their true character of heavy porn watcher inspired dialogue. hints of stella barey without the accompanying eroticism.

imagery is another okay but short offering that feels very stock.
it just looks and feels like patreon bait as there is no signs of love in the craft.
easily forgotten if it even gets you a boner.