Constructive criticism inbound
Add some calm to this chaos of a VN. It wasn't bad until after you get the meds. Then things just spiral out of control with what you're supposed to do. Some direction to what needs to be done would be a good idea.
Get the meds, girl has a break down, and then you have different areas you can go to. Hit the docks, and you have to find the girl. Find the girl and some how there's a new chick at the table. I pretty much quit at that point.
It has the makings of a good VN, but right now as an intro it needs to be redone. Add a guide or to do list and sort this thing out before it goes further off the rails. Good luck to the dev, and I'll check on it again after a few updates.
Add some calm to this chaos of a VN. It wasn't bad until after you get the meds. Then things just spiral out of control with what you're supposed to do. Some direction to what needs to be done would be a good idea.
Get the meds, girl has a break down, and then you have different areas you can go to. Hit the docks, and you have to find the girl. Find the girl and some how there's a new chick at the table. I pretty much quit at that point.
It has the makings of a good VN, but right now as an intro it needs to be redone. Add a guide or to do list and sort this thing out before it goes further off the rails. Good luck to the dev, and I'll check on it again after a few updates.