VN - Ren'Py - Sky Division [v0.15] [MariusAxe]

This story is amazing. It has depth that literally kept me going for so many hours focused on it. The new design in Dax is what brought me back. The initial design made me just skip over it. I'm glad the updated thumbnails had his new look. It is absolutely incredible. I have high hopes for the rest of the story and can not wait for more. Please keep doing amazing work!

An incredible character, the plot of the game is also very good. Only recommendation, more furro characters or maybe even human characters? (Maybe harem?). The setting is also wonderful, the drawing of the characters is very good in my opinion.

The story of this game is very wholesome, there a few instances where translations are not worded correctly but it does not take a lot of effort to deduct what the untranslated word is. the pacing of the story is great, i learned a lot about the characters and truly started to care about Dax and the lore between the two major factions of the war. the survival part was amazing and the ship part was also great to see! The Art feels a bit wonky but the style and detail is still pleasing to look at! my biggest gripe and its just me personally is the wish to make choices in the game that matter OR have consequences to the story and not just a "game over"

this game has gone thru a MAJOR upgrade and if you like a good story to read for both the lore and romance with a very cute romance partner to boot i highly suggest this game!

I played it completely with the AI design and I must say I liked it. Although I think the femboy should be more feminine.In addition to having more scenes between the 2. And that Dax feels jealous and feels like he's going to lose CM to Sam or something like that that he doesn't like is something I love.

I hope that the author of this one now that he uses his upload more regularly has a good story, that he adds more sex scenes and that he also adds content that makes Dax go crazy because of the smell of his mc.


Of course what I'm saying is part of my tastes and they are not far from what we have seen. I like that it now has options in other languages, it's excellent.

Another thing I would like to see added as a personal taste is to see Dax want to lick and smell his MC and have a love triangle where Dax feels threatened and doesn't like that new guy That Dax feels like he has to kill him and that the MC always stops him.

Well, it's an idea beyond all that. I hope the author finds this and knows that he's doing an excellent job. It turned out very well and that he continues like this.

Finish the job, finish the game and don't be like the 90% who don't finish visual novel games, that will give you more credibility and the bosses will come for that.

Don't start new games without finishing the previous one, even though I know that's not your case, keep this in mind. The greats go far leaving good foundations.



Thank you for reading carefully dorito-kun

The lore is pretty simple and great. It's been described amazingly to show a clear description of a horrible future without basically seeing it. Mc is very kind which is always good and dax is one of my most favorited characters in fiction now. I usually am not a fan with ai cg but you can tell the author puts good work into consistency and no flaws. Hopping for maybe more fluent sprites so it gives an animated look someday! Good job at making dax look awesome creator! I wish you luck in developing and just pledged to the patreon.

I love the direction of this game, can't wait to see how the next updates will go, and how this game will improve.
I think that the AI generated images are fucking hilarious, I can't unsee it plus (this might get fixed later) the white border around dax's green helmet.

love this VN

Good story. Could get better with some graphics, tho. Loved the flow of story and characters...... Hop to see more. The would building was good too.

This game might not be one of the most impressive VNs you will see, it clearly has it's problems, bugs and mistranslations are really common here. But, this is the most charming game I've ever played, despite the problems, this game has intoxicating charm. You can feel the passion and thought of the dev while playing it. It's something really rare to see recently.

I've played this game before, when it used hand-drawn art for the characters, and now, the game uses AI-art for everything, but even with the change, the game doesn't feel soulless at all, all of that because of the simple, but somewhat perfectly executed storytelling, the pacing, the scenario, everything comes together nicely.

Great story. Actual great path of being an Alpha but still caring. (Yes there are caring Alphas out there where you are rewarded nicely for your total submission and being a true harem gurl) Hoping there will be a final step of owning Dax as a pet

I Like the game and I am ready for the next update; I like when people try the hand at making games and seeing what sticks. Stick with it you got this.

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Very solid. The art is mildly amateurish, but that's what you are to expect when consuming amateur works. It is good regardless. The storytelling is very decent. The characterization is solid. It gets you to care, and paints a very bleak world to provide contrast and tension against. It also doesn't rush too hard, it is patient.

But, it also doesn't withold the lewd content, if that's what you're mostly after. All in all, one of the better works I've consumed.

Well written story. Reminded me of the movie "Enemy mine" with Dennis Quaid. Except the sex part then of course. Femboy stories are also somewhat rare on this site so that's a plus.

Great job to the creator!

Pretty amazing story to be honest, some new drawings of the characters and scenes could improve the experience a lot. That's all I can say about the bad things because everything else is good, this project has so much potential to be honest

Very good game, have been following its development since around 0.5 and the game has only gotten more and more compelling with each and every update. Good work man I hope to see this game get the reignition it deservers.

Do not be discouraged by the simple graphic of this VN. The story of survivorship is engaging and exciting!

A journey of castaway Romeo and Juliet with the theme of sci-fi and bloody war, an action romance story.

to my review

-quite fascinating story
-very rare sex scene
-politic and ideology
-myth and distopia
-kinda stelarris game but they exist?

to be honest, this very interesting game and i read all the story. i hope this continue the story "the rebellion again federation" i thought something miss
about lore here Federation and Empire but all it explain by player and

Game Version : V0.9

Great game by Marius, in terms of scenes there are very less, but the story is really good, it is not complicated but a simple one, but the way it's told is really good, Dax is really adorable in some scenes which makes it really satisfying to play. The last version ended in a real cliff hanger, hoping the story continues more and more scenes with the MC & Dax.

A solid Femboy game, not many are there, good luck bro with the future updates.

Surely a 11/10....Masta Piece

Defo one of the best VNs i've read, sexual or non-sexual, and perhaps even story of war. I used to stray away from gay furry porn but this is by far gay furry porn done in the most palletable manner.
At times a bit wordy; the speed didnt always match the energy, some longer sequences that wouldn't be bad with a trim but overall a beautiful story, brilliantly executed, and even in development the in progress ending has had me wanting the next part.

Gonna be real with you, the art is not AAA or even AA, probably somewhere around a 9-volt battery being used to power a wii remote but the remote is actually working better. These are not doctorate in art level characters; and regardless they're rather good. i dont mind the clipart lizard, and Dax's model, while crude, is still well-drawn and shows effort.

Man we need more femboy games because it should be a crime that there arent many because this is just fucking great.I had this on my radar for a while but when i finally played it i felt incredibly stupid for not playing it sooner.The whole enemies turned lovers thing is my weak point so this really pulled me in from the synopsis alone jesus this is a good VN.The art may not be the best for some people but i enjoy these types of art styles for the most part,yes it could be better but its still nice to look at.And i LOVE LOVE LOVE the freedom of choice I love femboy games and this hit the nail

Sky Division has been on my "to-do" list for a while and I finally got around to playing the story the last couple of days. There are hidden gems all over. I'm sure a lot of people passed over this because new dev, art is not "refined" (whatever the fuck that means), and "oh noes gays!".

Okay, yeah, it's gay. So if that's not your thing, this'll be a real quick game for you when Dax shoots you in the fucking head.

Let's get the "bad" part out of the way: graphics and visuals. So it's not AAA. It's not DAZ. It's not anything but hand-drawn art that's better than I can do. Props, man. I think there's some very minor things you can do in regard to sprites and transitions that would make the visual aspect of your game look a lot more polished, but the actual art itself...

The backgrounds are awesome. Love the setting. Daz is cute AF without being a supermodel. Yeah, it's all about tastes, but all graphic novels are about tastes. Enough about the visuals. Let's get to the really good aspects of Sky Division.

I'm not sure how much MariusAxe has put into the background. If he's got it all written down inside his head or out, or whether he's coming up with this in the spur of the moment, the story is running at a good pace -- the perfect pace for a VN like this. The story isn't forced or so unrealistic it forced me out of the headspace of the game.

Given the setting, the characters act in a rather believable way. Enough information about the history and setting is dripped out by MariusAxe's writing to keep my attention and, more importantly, keep me emotionally invested in the story and Dax.

If you're not a gatekeeping-visuals-pansy and can handle a little furry gay sex, this is an excellent choice to spend a couple hours with. It's one of those hidden gems. I can't wait to see what happens after Part 7.