VN - Ren'Py - Sky Division [v0.15] [MariusAxe]

Sky Division has been on my "to-do" list for a while and I finally got around to playing the story the last couple of days. There are hidden gems all over. I'm sure a lot of people passed over this because new dev, art is not "refined" (whatever the fuck that means), and "oh noes gays!".

Okay, yeah, it's gay. So if that's not your thing, this'll be a real quick game for you when Dax shoots you in the fucking head.

Let's get the "bad" part out of the way: graphics and visuals. So it's not AAA. It's not DAZ. It's not anything but hand-drawn art that's better than I can do. Props, man. I think there's some very minor things you can do in regard to sprites and transitions that would make the visual aspect of your game look a lot more polished, but the actual art itself...

The backgrounds are awesome. Love the setting. Daz is cute AF without being a supermodel. Yeah, it's all about tastes, but all graphic novels are about tastes. Enough about the visuals. Let's get to the really good aspects of Sky Division.

I'm not sure how much MariusAxe has put into the background. If he's got it all written down inside his head or out, or whether he's coming up with this in the spur of the moment, the story is running at a good pace -- the perfect pace for a VN like this. The story isn't forced or so unrealistic it forced me out of the headspace of the game.

Given the setting, the characters act in a rather believable way. Enough information about the history and setting is dripped out by MariusAxe's writing to keep my attention and, more importantly, keep me emotionally invested in the story and Dax.

If you're not a gatekeeping-visuals-pansy and can handle a little furry gay sex, this is an excellent choice to spend a couple hours with. It's one of those hidden gems. I can't wait to see what happens after Part 7.

despite being poorly drawn or animated this scenario is just out of this world this is exactly what you imagine when you are a femboy enjoyer
the background and story is humble and impressive at the same time i hope i see more like this in the future

This is a simple idea executed simply, and I mean that as a compliment. Funnily enough I've had fantasies with pretty much the exact same premise as this game-that being two enemy pilots shooting each other down over some unpopulated island somewhere and then falling for each other-but I sure as hell never made it into a game, so the creator gets all my props.

If you go in with reasonable expectations, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.

The art is the only weakness this game has, and it's really not a glaring one. I absolutely love both Dax and the MC, and this game surprised me with the depth of its lore and story.

It's also really hot if you enjoy femboys, and has the surprising but welcome option of having the MC bottom.

Art might not be the best but its pretty smooth, maybe just adding a bit more details would be perfect.

The story is pretty good, i would love to have more type of scenes or angles.

Dax is great even if im not gay i love it, i will be waiting for the next update.

Great Job

The art might not be its strength, but oh boy THE WOLF BOI IS SO THICC AND CUTE.
Pretty hot writing for the down bad, if you like your men with big asses this is for you. Ah yeah an he's a furry too, why do you care?

Review as of 0.5.0
-Femboy with a fat ass and thick thighs
-Characters and story feel natural, no overreliance on tropes
-Romance isn't rushed
-The game handles big topics, namely the war between the humans and the furry race, with a surprising amount of maturity. Neither side is correct and there are no easy answers. Doesn't feel preachy, which is a hurdle that not every writer makes it over.
-You can choose to have the femboy be the top (not for everyone, but a surprising addition that most devs would have left out, and a more than welcome one as far as I'm concerned)

-Art is a bit rough. Far from the worst I've ever seen, but definitely a lot of room for improvement. Honestly it isn't that much of a negative for the game, Dax's appearance and the quality of the story go a long way towards smoothing this over for me.
-One section of dialogue wasn't translated into English (wasn't exactly game breaking since it was just one line, but still.)

Definitely enjoyed this one WAY more than I thought I would, and I'll be looking forward to future updates.

It's a femboy centered romance VN, which is a rare find. There's a decent amount of content so far and the romance thus far is engaging, though I wouldn't say there is much choice (not that that's necessarily a bad thing).

Review as of version 0.1
Story and lewd scene are pretty good. I really like Dax and his design. The art is probably the weakest point though and a lot dialogue isn't translated to english. Other than that pretty good game. Excited for more.