HTML - Slut [v0.01] [Migreel]

I really tried to play this game, because I like all kind of corruption games especially with female protagonists, but this game just has to many problems. the writing is really bad. I suggest let someone with the right skills proof read it. the main problem is the lust mechanic in the game. you as the player has to be within a certain range of lustpoints. if its to low you loose, if its to high you loose I didnt read anything, just tried to be within the lust range. to me that takes all the fun out of the reading and the immersion in to the story and eventually all the fun of the game, either make the range bigger or give different results if you fail the lust range. in short, in this version, the game is no fun at all.

Is a good game. It has a lot of potential, I liked the main idea behind the game. Also I like the fact that you are a virus and the game loop. I would say that the story is pretty confusing, like I don't really know who is who. But overall a nice game with a lot of potential, I hope that it will be continued because I 'll play it. 4/5