VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Slutty Mommy [v1.0] [IceFury]

A decent looking short VN that had the potential to be really good, though I wouldn't mind it being a little longer. The animations are well done and the sex sounds are pretty good.

What drags it down is the awful writing. Some of that is due to translation issues I suspect. Its like google translate or a similar program was used. Some of the sentences make zero sense. You're left scratching your head trying to figure out what the Dev was trying to say.

Some of it though is at times the dialog is really cringe inducing. I was left wondering who talks like that?

With better writing this would have been far more enjoyable. It looks good but reads bad.

It's a very short but sweet game. I enjoyed it more than I thought I would, and I really appreciated the story's build-up. I will give it 5 stars even though anal would really elevate the whole experience, especially in the last scene.
Gameplay: none - no choices
Graphics: 4/5
Sound:4/5
Story:6/5
Overall experience:4/5 (no anal)

Great short story! I Like the writing and the artwork, too bad it's a very short story. The mom dose not seem to be very slutty, It's more like the son seducing the drunk mom. I hope the DEV will make more stories like this