VN - Unity - Abandoned - Smut Story [v0.3] [Cheesecake3D]

Early work in progress - it's a "click-to-see-next-slide" Visual Novel (a.k.a. powerpoint presentation). First of all it was abandoned so it's not even worth playing, there's not much content here. It was released as a "work in progress" and from the start it looked like one of those projects you doubt will ever get finished. Of course, it's a generic "young guy lives in house full of women" visual novel cliche and the story is "oh, hi let's fuck". Click to see next scene. The only reason this gets two stars is because the models are well done. Too bad it's a waste of nice visuals. And a waste of everybody's time.

OK so the game was posted in July and so far we have gotten maybe 10 min of content at most. The game has no plot at all just 4 horney women that want to fuck you. There is no buildup no reason nothing. One of the girls you meet just walks into the bathroom with you and you fuck her without almost even a word.
Also there is a choice system however none of the choices have been implemented so its just a KN and the one time you can make a choice if you make the wrong one it just resets you back to the start of the conversation.
The only reason this gets two stars is because the models are well done and the animations are passable. If it wasn't for that it would get a solid 1 star.
The dev has done the work for the renders models and animations if only they cared to at least make a passible plot to go along with it. As it sits right now there is very little reason to play the game.

Version: 0.3

PROS

• animation - a bit laggy but still very well done as well as the abundance in it and what I'm anticipating
• weird humor - the comedy that spills over into sexual themes is enjoyable

CONS

• dialogue choices - reading the 3 choice system, it is a bit weak right now. the Good is TOO good (who would ever choose it?) and the Neutral doesn't seem that neutral most of the times. instead of alignment; knowing that 100% of us are playing for the adult shit, each choice should offer a degree of perversion as we all share different levels of that so something like Vanilla for Good, Pervert for Neutral and Fiend for Evil ).
• character faces and background - when MC first enters house, the character faces are too neutral (like how the default character model's face would be) and the background is too dull

I personally like the exhibitionist girl - I see a lot of hot gags coming out of that. I also like the interactive instagrum idea. And to me, the red head (ashlynn) is ugly - if you ever do change her face I'm sure you can use the whole plastic surgery thing about her as a reason.

Fantastic animations but terrible story and dialogue. I guess you'll either love this or strongly dislike this game.

This was obviously not really my cup o' tea. The models all have over-sized tits and look nothing like real people. On top of that, I actually felt myself get dumber as I was reading the conversations. Think of the lowest-budget porn movie you ever watched, and then slightly worse.


I'm sure there are plenty of people who don't care about the story and just want to see some big titted bimbos get fucked. Well, in that case this is the game for you! But it's a bit too simple and unrealistic for me personally.

The first two updates were very short but excellent. For the moment the scenario and the dialogues are quite basic, so I hope they will be deepened as the game evolves.
The graphics are really beautiful. The bodies of the characters are fantastic.
The main character is different from most other games of the same genre, which is a very good point. The interface is light which is pleasant.

Finally, the main point for me is that the animations are really well done.

God tier renders and animations so far... The only disappointing thing is the poor content available rn...

If the guy behind this keeps providing quality updates (and reasonably regular) this is going to be BIBLICAL.

There is nothing better in this world than thicc ass bitches. And this game GOT thicc ass bitches. If you like curvier body types like I do, this game will def peak your interest. Girls are hot asf, and while there is not a lot of content out rn, there is a lot of potential with how high the production value of the sex scenes in this game are. Sounds, animation, and moaning ALWAYS add more to lewd scenes. I'm hoping in the future that we get some text during sex scenes too because dirty talk is also important.

Game does not seem too story-heavy at the moment though, still looking forward to the future of this game!

finally a nice animated thick but not to thick chicks, im really excited for more future updates. this guy deserves it. would recommend to people that enjoy animated scenes and big booty chicks

just wish there would be more updates faster ahaha

So far really good, animations, models looking clean and smooth.
We'll have to see and wait to see how this turns out!
Keep it up, I feel like it can turn out to be one of the best games in the long run.

The animation looks excellent for such an early release and the girls are very hot. I only recommend working more on the dialogues, as they seem rather simplistic and make the story a bit poor. This comment is posted as release version 0.1, so there isn't much content available yet.