Let's start with 2 most significant factors about the Dev.
1. His imagination is really vivid and broad. He could have done great if he created a pure fantasy VN.
2. His knowledge about history is as bad as it can be, same with his common sense. He f**ed up the story because of missing these important qualities.
As we have already delved into this, I must start with
The Story
The plot thinking was good. Should have gone with pure fantasy. Trying to make it historical fantasy made this a crap VN. He has no knowledge about culture, history, language, clothing but here he comes and tries to write a genre which requires having the knowledge as a compulsory. So, The core plot idea had promise. It might have worked beautifully as a straight-up fantasy tale. However, by blending it with a historical setting—a genre that demands accuracy, consistency, and immersion—the dev unintentionally turned it into a mess of inaccuracies and contradictions.
The ARtwork
Models This is what is only good thing about this VN... If not for all these beautiful looking models I would have given straight 1 star. The sex scenes is not at the same level as the model or remder. I don't know why. But the adult sex scenes are almost garbage specially considering 1 very significant patern. The sex came a lot late but as unlike a slow development game it didn't put enough effort into the first sex scene which is a must for these type of VNs.
The dev undeniably has a vivid and broad imagination. With the world-building and characters, it’s clear he could have created a phenomenal pure fantasy visual novel. The potential was there. Unfortunately, his lack of historical knowledge and basic common sense seriously undermined the entire story. Attempting a historical fantasy without any understanding of culture, language, clothing, or historical context was a critical mistake.
Finally A promising idea ruined by poor execution in areas that matter most for its genre. The dev should either commit fully to pure fantasy or do proper research before diving into history-based storytelling. Stunning models alone aren’t enough to save a story built on a shaky foundation.
One final suggestion:
Scrap the total separation of clan events. The clan separation should not exceed beyond the main story. But the relations with the girls also suffer significantly. This disastroous decision made the VN plot weak to even weaker.
I think there is stll time to overlap the story.
I also don't understand how it gets so much positive reviews given so many drawbacks!!!
I guess the the saying is true.... "Those who think with their DICKS don't use their head that often." This is why this weak VN has so many 5 stars. Only the beautiful models stopped me from giving straight 1star.
1. His imagination is really vivid and broad. He could have done great if he created a pure fantasy VN.
2. His knowledge about history is as bad as it can be, same with his common sense. He f**ed up the story because of missing these important qualities.
As we have already delved into this, I must start with
The Story
The plot thinking was good. Should have gone with pure fantasy. Trying to make it historical fantasy made this a crap VN. He has no knowledge about culture, history, language, clothing but here he comes and tries to write a genre which requires having the knowledge as a compulsory. So, The core plot idea had promise. It might have worked beautifully as a straight-up fantasy tale. However, by blending it with a historical setting—a genre that demands accuracy, consistency, and immersion—the dev unintentionally turned it into a mess of inaccuracies and contradictions.
The ARtwork
Models This is what is only good thing about this VN... If not for all these beautiful looking models I would have given straight 1 star. The sex scenes is not at the same level as the model or remder. I don't know why. But the adult sex scenes are almost garbage specially considering 1 very significant patern. The sex came a lot late but as unlike a slow development game it didn't put enough effort into the first sex scene which is a must for these type of VNs.
The dev undeniably has a vivid and broad imagination. With the world-building and characters, it’s clear he could have created a phenomenal pure fantasy visual novel. The potential was there. Unfortunately, his lack of historical knowledge and basic common sense seriously undermined the entire story. Attempting a historical fantasy without any understanding of culture, language, clothing, or historical context was a critical mistake.
Finally A promising idea ruined by poor execution in areas that matter most for its genre. The dev should either commit fully to pure fantasy or do proper research before diving into history-based storytelling. Stunning models alone aren’t enough to save a story built on a shaky foundation.
One final suggestion:
Scrap the total separation of clan events. The clan separation should not exceed beyond the main story. But the relations with the girls also suffer significantly. This disastroous decision made the VN plot weak to even weaker.
I think there is stll time to overlap the story.
I also don't understand how it gets so much positive reviews given so many drawbacks!!!
I guess the the saying is true.... "Those who think with their DICKS don't use their head that often." This is why this weak VN has so many 5 stars. Only the beautiful models stopped me from giving straight 1star.