VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sofia Unexpected Meeting [Final] [Coriolan]

Meh, it's kinda nice, but too short, and you may end up disappointed/unsatisfied (I did).

• The girl/model is (very) hot alright;
• animation wise it's not much; there's 1 fluid anim loop (doggy fucking), and there's some 2-3 frame stuff (fingering & cunnilingus);
• the sex moves too fast:
  • the bj is some stills where she takes it all in. No animation there, no going back/forth. Pretty nice renders though. When she's standing up again we can see teary eyes / run-down makeup. Would be nice to have seen that already in close-up when she was doing the bj;
  • it's only doggy fucking, no other position. After that a pretty nice cum shower though (face & boobs);
• there's music, and some sex sfx;
• I found the change of attitude (the bitch calling) of the hobo annoying, cheap and not sexy.

Short summary:


It’s a tiny slideshow made in Ren’Py, not a game. The story is retarded. All the raving about the renders from the reviewers? Renders were indeed great for 2020. Now they are nothing special. You won’t miss much here



Good Things

• Main character is hot, but with completely unrealistic figure
• Renders are OK, some are decent

Bad points

• Nonsense story
• Slideshow, not a game
• Very short
• No satisfactory sex scene in this at all

I thoroughly enjoyed @Coriolan 's story, it was short, but the renders really shows his commitment to quality. It is a wonderful appetizer to what I hope will be more and more projects from him. Needless to say, I am supporting on Patreon to help bring more projects to light.

This is top quality and an indication of what to expect from this multi-talented developer. Beautiful art and animation, [polished to a shine] coupled with a compelling and kinky narrative, make this VN project a must play. I'm going to support him on Patreon for sure.

Cool game, I liked the render and I found the sofia hot with the dress, the story is short but cool, I wanted a little more "action" but overall it was a cool game, waiting for new games with the sofia

In short: Good renders, but a terrible story.

In long:
The renders are great.. nothing to complain about there. We've seen Coriolan's fanart and although i gotta say that those are better than the renders we see in this game... This little game looks great nonetheless.

But the story is absolutely terrible. (spoilers ahead, but since it is a very short game with no choices, it makes little difference i think.)
You play as Sofia, who comes from this party/gala type event and wants to go home. She is wearing an elegant yet sexy dress and she is a young attractive woman <- this is important to know. She then:
- decides to take a cab home: smart decision
- The cabdriver tries to convince her to walk home instead: wtf? a young attractive woman wearing a sexy dress should walk home in the middle of the night instead and the cabby suggests this?
- She agrees: Again... wtf? (game gives a choice, but the Author tells you to make a different choice and poofs you back to the question with only 1 option left now.... then why have this choice here in the first place?)
- she takes a shortcut through a dark alley: again.. wft? the dumbest decision so far.. ok, minus her idea to agree with the cabby to walk home.
- she nears 2 shady guys, and instead of turning around she continues walking
-* Homeless man to the rescue*
- Homeless man takes her to a church: an actually smart decision, not gonna lie
- nun gives her a hot bath and is completely infatuated with Sofia and starts to grope her which Sofia is apparently OK with...
- Homeless man is now up for the bath, walks in on a naked Sofia and the 2 have sex.

I don't mind crazy stories that logically don't make a lot of sense.. especially if they are adult/porn games...
But this story and the decisions that the MC makes are so far removed from reality that it becomes just stupid.
This may sound brutal, but that is the truth: An attractive woman who was about to take a taxi home, now decides to walk home, through a dark alley, past shady figures, (saved by homeless guy and goes to a church), is fine with being groped by the Nun/Reverend Mother and then has sex with the homeless guy.
This is so far removed from anything remotely logical that i personally cannot enjoy this game.

The renders look great... really, Maybe not as 12/10 as his fanart... but still great. But the story is just a massive 'No' for me.

2/5 stars, but that is pure because of the renders... nothing else

There is really nothing wrong with this game.
I loved every minute of it.

But, it's very short and it's a kinetic novel, so I just can not give it 5 stars.

Graphics, 10/10
Story too short to score, but I loved the bit that was there
Sex scene /Erotica 10/10
Props for some sound and voice.

I would say you have the toolset for an awsome game.

Good luck!

Damn dude one of my most favourite fanart gus, mr. Coriolan, does VN's now?
Am i happy? In-fucking-deed i am!

About the game - which is obviously more a visual novel as mentioned:

Pros:

• Coriolan
• Hobo
• curvy female mc (which kinda looks like a hotter/curvier version of Monica from FB)
• pretty mc with a pretty face and pretty tits
• catchy music (even i had to tone it a bit down)
• story quite straight forward but it was mentioned it will be quite short so i wasn't surprised and i like it
• liking the setting
• already many old guys to chose from hehe
• titsucking (even sadly not very visible)
• nice renders (great overall quality as suspected)
• to be continued

possible Cons:

• the joke you would have a choices *grrr* xD (thought i can go with taxi guy and have naughty time with him but it turned out better anyway )
• sex was quite short and sometimes camera angles could have been a bit better (but i know i am quite nitpicky regarding this stuff so dw)

I really like the quality renders, the idea and setting, that its a fem protagonist with old, ugly guys, its the first time i wished that old nun would have a dick and would fuck her (normally no big futa fan), the implementation of the story around the hobo and her sex scene could have been a bit better imo but i am speaking from a high horse and only say this cause i think this is quality work and cause i know how professional Coriolan is). its kinda sad you don't have a few more choices not for the sake of letting her be pure but more cause of the spicyness of the situation (but i totally understand this would mean much more work)
just regarding the idea, setting, quality and female mc i would give this VN game 5 stars but a few small things bothered me a tiny bit personally. but a really good VN game with high potential. i really enjoyed it and look very forward for more!

thank you for deciding to make such games now, Coriolan. Thanks for making and sharing with us. Thanks for the great work and for delivering niche fetishes (which are also mine). Keep it up!

*(will tell others about it. really certain latex and darkman will love it too )

I've long been a fan of Coriolan's renders in their many contributions to fan art threads for other games, so was excited to see what they would do with a game of their own.
All in all I am not dissapointed. Yes it's pretty short, but it's a short kinetic novel, so the fact that I wanted more just goes to show how good it is.
The renders are fantastic, there is even decent short animation and good sound effects.
I'm slightly dissapointed that parker from JOHN was teased at the beginning, but hopefully he can star in a future game. I'm happy that the hobo from AEA got some love though.
This might not suit everyone, but if you like the kink of dirty old men getting their hands on gorgeous busty young women, then you'll love this.

What should I say. First of all the graphic quality ist nice. The rendering is good, fast loading and nice looking.
It´s really short. Extremely short and the dialogues are absolutely not wort to read.
Away from the graphic works, the whole thing is a work from less then a day. What would b e OK if you see it only as a demo.
Without any understandable storytelling and no noticable kink it´s nothing more then a bunch of good looking pictures. There is no immersion in this demo, you ´re just clicking and asking youself why and what an d then it´s over.
It seems to me the author is a talented visualist but has a lack of experience regarding romantics, storytelling and kink. Could be because he´s too young, what I don´t know.
After all it´s not worth the download.

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Nice Story
+ Good looking Lady
+ Hot Sex
+ No Bullshit
+ No Grinding
+ Completed Game

Cons:
-could have been Longer

Conclusion:
Love this Game, was starting to get bored with the past games being either to short or nothing happening,and then this Jewel came up....Great Characters and also different ones for a change,the graphics are great and high quality, with fast pace of the game it completed my expectations...
The only negative thing I was able to find was that it ended way to soon,maybe because I enjoyed it so much.
Hoping of seeing more of this Dev and his work....
No Blue Balling here!
Damn worth the download.

johnalbert999 said he would check the game out for us, but since he didn't report back I decided to go ahead and check it out myself. It's a nice little game with beautiful renders.

It was not clear to me from the overview what the game is about, so for those who like to know: it's a pretty standard 'hot girl walking home alone after a night of clubbing' plot. SPOILERS: it contains sexual harassment (by two thugs), some light lesbian groping (by an old nun) and mostly flashing, groping, oral and vaginal sex with an old hobo (with a horse dick, I know some people aren't into that).

Overall: very nice visuals, beautiful models and even some short animations and sex/moaning sounds. The story and dialogue are decent, it's no Shakespeare but pretty much what you'd expect from a short kinetic novel. Probably around 10 minutes of gameplay.

Very good concept.. short stories, quick, completed kind of Netflix approach to TV Series.

I am really up for it, quick to develop and freedom to explore different kinks without being stuck in a massive never ending full of bug game.

On the other hand... short stories... must be meaningful, well thought and the quality must be high in terms of visual and plot...

that is the main challenge. Good visual without plot or viceversa.. will be soon forgotten