3D-Daz 3D-Blender Some pics for crit

[GBStudio]

Hi, i'd like to hear what you think about my pics. mb there is a way to make them better

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[Papa Ernie]

They look fine to me. However, you need to tell what your intent for this scene is so people can determine if your objective was met.

Good luck!

 

[GBStudio]

That supposed to be an opening scene where the MC is busy with “important” things and next he will receive an email.