VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Somebody's Elses Mother [Final] [caLTD]

Final version reviewed

Final? It's about five minutes long.

A sexually frustrated mother wakes up in the middle of the night and discovers that her son is not yet home from a party. She goes to the basement to get a bottle of wine and discovers her sons friend sleeping on the couch. She immediately notices his big cock in his shorts and starts fliting with him. They have sex, and the next morning they have pancakes. The end.

Really. That's it.

Pros:

1- The sex animations were actually pretty good.

2- Decent renders and set design.

Cons:

1- The story was absolutely absurd, but the dialogue was even worse. I assume it is a machine translation as the dialogue was incredibly awkward and filled with numerous grammatical errors. This is the main reason for the poor review.

2- It's more like a demo, so don't expect much content.

3- The Milf was strange looking. Unsure why the dev chose this model. Her facial features were sort of masculine and she looked more like a grandmother, than a mother. This is all subjective of course, as I'm sure there are some people out there that think she is actually attractive. At least she didn't have watermelon tits and orange peels for lips. So kudos there.

Final thoughts-

The game should have been titled "Sex and Pancakes".

Don't bother unless you want to see this particular Milf model have sex.

If it' a first attempt it shows promise, at least from a visual perspective. The dev has skill with animations and renders, but if he/she is serious about moving forward I would suggest getting a lot of help with the story and especially the dialogue.

Good luck.

For a developer's first attempt using Ren'py and Daz, this isn't half bad. The comment section has pointed out the incorrect English grammar of the game's title, and there are a handful of times when Beatrix mentions the wrong name, but overall, "Somebody Else's Mother" is a fun, short, and enjoyable story.

Reading every line of dialogue means this AVN will take between ten and 20 minutes to complete, depending on the player's level of English comprehension.

The story ends with no absolute cliffhangers or plot threads which need completion, yet leaves the player thinking about what is next, as some ideas are hinted at during the final conversation.

Overall, "Somebody Else's Mother" is neither a bad game nor is it a great game. It is average without being mediocre, and that is not a bad thing, especially for a first game from a new developer.

I wish the developer good luck, and I look forward to seeing more in the future.