VN Someone to bounce a few ideas off of and get a little feedback on story development for new game

Cold North

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May 6, 2020
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I have started working on a game that I am planning on posting here when it is ready enough to start playing.
It is going to be a VN-type (ren'py-based) game. The story so far is not extremely unique in and of itself (guy coming back to the town where he grew up, moves in with some family members, then some relationships start developing with said family members and some other people in the town, etc.) but there are going to be a few (optional) tags that I feel there aren't that many games of this type with (at least not that I have found). Things like trans, pegging (I don't think there's a tag for that, but oh well), gay...

So far I have mostly finished several characters (in DAZ), and I have started making some flow charts of the story progression for the MC's interactions and relationship with some of the characters. Now, this is where I would love some help. If someone would be willing to look at these flow charts (and maybe some notes I've made in the beginning) and give me a little feedback on it, before I start putting all of the characters stories together into one cohesive story and putting in all of the details, dialogues, choices, etc.
You don't need to have experience making games etc., I just need someone who can give some constructive critisism and maybe a few ideas, and I guess just someone to talk to about this who is not myself.

I don't really know anyone with whom I can talk about this kind of stuff (you know, incest porn games with trans content, etc.), so I am hoping someone on here is willing to help.


Sorry if I am posting this in the wrong section, I wasn't entirely sure where this should be posted.
 
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