VN - Ren'Py - Something is wrong with my wife [v1.0] [GoofyAhhCreator]

Well nobody has mentioned it yet, got a few screens in before the inconsistent grammar, spelling and punctuation errors caused me to nope out. Maybe ESL or MTL but random capitalization alone made my skin crawl. I don't need a Masters in English level writing and 4th wall breaking dialogue is okay, but keep it consistent.
ex. friend texting wife, "I don't know what to where."
Speaking of formatting the texts from the friend all overwrite each other, only appearing in the top line of the phone screen, while texts from the wife, form a history with one appearing after the other. This is what I'm talking about game looks fun but formatting makes it unaccessible.

Solid start for a game, it's a visual novel that does not try to reinvent the wheel, but does very well what visual novels should do. Characters are well written and believable, story has a nice pace with good writing, and the "cheating" is not thrown on your face, it is still building up. CGs are really well done too. My only "complaints" are that the friend, Maddie, does not seem to be drawn in the same style as the rest of the characters, and a few typing errors.

0.1
It was a good start, until the end of the episode, where everything changed very quickly.
The story is well thought out, but poorly executed.
It doesn't seem as NTS-like as other games, but at the same time, the wife was instantly a slut , and I don't like that; it loses the game's grace.

Renders are Ok
writing ok


I'm going to give it 2 stars.