VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Something to Write About: The Author [Ch. 7.1] [STWAdev]

Others have said similar, but the characters are easily what make this VN shine. I found myself getting invested in nearly every LI, and almost all of the endings were great culminations to the story. The author's writing, particularly their use of language, was pretty consistently good throughout the story. The MC's model was also refreshingly distinct from most of the other VNs around.

There were a few loose ends left unresolved in this installment, and I feel the game could have been served by branching the story a bit earlier/ more completely, but overall 5/5 great game.

really a great game, well made and well thought out. but i don't feel like giving it full marks because i found it weak from a graphical point of view, both for the level of the animations (really limited) and for the general quality of the renders, where often the expressions of the characters were repeated and rather exaggerated.

but on the other hand, in terms of involvement and story it deserves top marks, each of the characters described is interesting and engaging, every time you spend time on one of the Lis you discover something about them

maybe not all the endings are equally successful (especially Kimberly's, who is the best character, and Lyndie's, who aesthetically was my favourite)

definitely recommended

The story was not too long. But the plot and the character development was very good. Each character was unique and well fleshed out. I throughly enjoyed this game. The renders were not bad either. The choices in the game were significant and did have impact on the outcome of the game. I also appreciate the many possible endings that we were allowed to choose from. I look forward to playing the author's next game.

This one came highly recommended from many folks and I concur with their assessment. The completion of The Author is satisfying on many fronts. From a story perspective certainly folks will have their favorites given the amount of different endings...myself included (Aofie and Lyndie #1)...but enjoyed playing them all since the writing for each created different feelings and connection; no rinse and repeat here.

It was also nice to see the evolving of the visuals, animations and "atmosphere" as the chapters progressed. STWADev continues to advance and the next project I'm sure will continue that advancement.

As a story first guy, I like to see the scenes enhance the story and not just thrown out there just because and that definitely was the case here. STWADev placement of the scenes and the scenes themselves were excellent IMO and helped increase the story's impact.

Hopefully you will enjoy The Author as much as I did.

Nice one!

I have to admit, I initially did not get into the story that much. I did not really connect with the MC. Even halfway through, I kinda thought," The writing is good, but it does not do it for me." I think I will give it 4 stars at the most.

Even the erotic content was not doing it for me, It's definitely there, but from the start, you could feel that it's not a core focus of the game. For instance, the girls would talk a bout a second round of sex, and then the screen would just go to black.

But towards the end, The writing in my view was just so good. The ending and the closure of all the characters were awesomely done. Although the game had a harem feel to it, it never felt like a fuck festival. The girls although they liked each other as friends were never "happy" to share you. They kind of just avoided that topic.

That all contributed to a very realistic setting and dynamic between the characters. And like life, good times never last forever, and your group had to break up at some stage. I literally loved the last part of the game and the last part actually lifted the first part of the game as well.

The MC is still not my favourite MC of games I have played.

I would not rate this a normal Adult Game, but it's a damn good Visual novel with some adult parts in it.

So
Character model : 8/10
Story: 10/10
Sex scenes: 9/10
Renders: 8/10

Definitely reccomended

At the start I wasn't really feeling it.. but wow, the more I played it the more engaged I got with the story. Good dialogue with a deep story is a perfect combination for me. Really felt connected with the characters. Renders look good and although there are no animations, I didn't care. The overall experience was great.
I recommend you play it with Koga3's sound mod and with a transparent text box mod, made it much more enjoyable for me.

Although the game isn't perfect, I give this game five stars because I really enjoyed it and I think that anybody that plays it will enjoy in some way or another.
I must say that girls are awesome, not in the graphic term, which they are quite good but not at top games level, but in their personality. We must understand that this is a semi-harem game, si they are quite easy, but they have their own traits, problems and interests. I really fell in love with all them and their relationship with MC.
As one of the main pros of this game I would say that all characters are graphically believable, yes they are well endowed, but not humongous asses or tits.
In the cons, I felt that a lot of scenes required more Cgs as, several events, are narrated without images and a black screen.
Similar to many request... I want a full harem ending

This is a brilliant example of, how deep and entertaining, visual novel games can become! The characters are distinct with their own unique personalities. Choices you make are remembered throughout the storyline. Relationships are organic and changeable. I totally, totally love this game.

Mister Bombastic nailed pretty much every point I wanted to make so I'm not going to write much. What saved the game for me (if you can say that) were Lyndie and Dru characters because I'm a sucker for that type.

This is an exceptionally deep story, great flexibility in terms of how the MC interacts with the girls. Wonderful backstories, great writing. It is about a college writer and author but even so, the characters all see a bit more high-falluting than I would expect in any set of real people. I have played through all endings the natural way, and they were all written out to satisfaction, in general. Would love to see a "final" version that fleshes things out, with maybe more animations and images for the endings, but this wrapped up nicely so far

Good little gem of a game, with a surprisingly deep story and engaging characters. My only complaint here is that the H-scenes are somewhat disappointing, with few images and no real animations. Still would recommend this game.

It's a really good game. I've greatly enjoyed the writing and dialogues. It quickly becomes apparent that this game was given more thought than you're run of the mill fuckfest. Overall, the story is good, the characters believable and the visuals nice.

good graphics, great story with twists and turns with plenty of humor and plenty to play and too sweet endings. can't ask more.

game has plenty of sexscenes so can't complain about lack of those, each character is unique and also crazy on their own way.

The game is pretty good, the story is ok and sex scenes too tho i wished there were more for each character. The script sometimes feels like its going in circles but the dev managed to give a good enough conclussion.

Also, Aoife besto girl

Perhaps I wish the story were longer.
The graphics are pretty good.
Animations OK.
Quite a lot of romantic interests and varied models.
Good characterization, entertaining dialogues.
And overall an optimistic story of people bettering themselves.
A good product.
I wish the author the best in his next projects.

I write very few reviews, but I have to for this VN.

It's definitely on my list of 10 all-time favorites, and ranks near the top. But it's only the first chapter of what is planned to be a trilogy, with cross-over elements, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing the next chapters.

The story is engaging, heart-warming at times, erotic at times, a bit heartbreaking at times, but hilarious at times. Its author is a legitimate Writer as well as a Developer.

There are 9 possible endings, two of which involve more than one woman (though the Harem tag can't really be applied since you do have to choose who you end up with).

There are also a couple of very good walkthroughs for this, if that's your preference.

A solid 5 stars.

Great writing along with interesting story. It's sad to see the story end. I hope to see more from these devs in the future. They were timely on releases, the content of each release was significant and most startling these days... they didn't quit halfway through development.

It's okay. I'm not going to get into analyzing the plot or the story, because for me that wasn't as relevant as the "fun" bits. When people come to F95 for these kinds of games, they generally do it to get their rocks off, so to speak, and while you could technically do that with this, there are definitely better options out there. The writing for the story itself and its paths is okay, but the sex scenes are definitely subpar. H Games that really stand out and gain traction seem to have a solid core theme or fetish or at least a really fun or even just rather personable MC, and this really didn't seem to. I suppose if you have to have a black MC for fetish or maybe self-insert reasons, you don't have many options, so this could be worth your time, but otherwise I'd probably have to recommend that you give it a pass.

Again, it's not bad, but it's not going to wow you either, thus the mid-range score. The very first couple scenes can pretty adequately set your expectations moving forward.

Just finished the latest chapter, and if you're not playing through this VN, you really need to. What's done here is fantastic writing, great renders and yes has some fun lewd scenes. If you're looking for pure fap material, you may want to go elsewhere, but if you're looking for amazing story telling. A roller coaster of emotions. Then this is one VN you need to check out.

tl;dr: in my opinion, definitely worth playing, overall very good and non-linear VN

When it comes to a visual side of the game, inside STWA you will find number of good looking characters. Not top-notch, not trash, just overall good. Same goes for sceneries, backgrounds and all that. It is pleasent to eye, but certainly there is a lot of room for improvement. However, to me visuals is a secondary thing next the novel aspect of the game, and this is where STWA really shines.

You are gonna experience a engaging, relation-focused story, quite uneventful for much of the time - but I wouldn't say boring. Slow pace is one of the advantages, cause it allows you to really dive into the presented world and character. Adult content is an optional addition to this game and not main theme (for me this is always huge plus). And what is worth mentioning, from what I can tell, it is quite non-linear story (for VN anyway).

Characters you are going to meet are very distinguishable. Each girl has unique personality. Most of them are very likeable. However, truth be told, none of the characters got me hooked up. Not really. Sometimes you just know from the start that you like this or that girl. For me it was not the case... UNTIL later in the story certain character is introduced and turns the world upside down. In my opinion, is a real sweetheart, a treasure and the brightest star of the game.

Give it a try! Fingers crossed for this project.