Just starting out, but I'm disappointed the stripping/dancing isn't animated.
A lot of the animated scenes are littered with unnecessary exposition. It's hard to see the action.
You don't need to describe something if you can see it happening, especially live. If you MUST describe something, add dialogue to move the plot along.
There's no soundtrack, which is eerie. Too much (or unsynchronized) grunting can also be alarming, but dead silence is just as bad.
A lot of the animated scenes are littered with unnecessary exposition. It's hard to see the action.
You don't need to describe something if you can see it happening, especially live. If you MUST describe something, add dialogue to move the plot along.
There's no soundtrack, which is eerie. Too much (or unsynchronized) grunting can also be alarming, but dead silence is just as bad.