VN - Ren'Py - Something [v0.6] [Forefinger]

Now how do I start with this game?
1. The English, looks like it went through the Google mixer 3 times
2. The story. Well it sounds rather implausible, but maybe that bad English makes it even more implausible.
3. The characters. They are rather good, there are the usual stereotypes, but all in all OK.
4. The fetishes. Up till now it looks good, can't wait to see what comes in the way of fetishes, would love to see some hard stuff like bdsm, bestiality, humiliation, even pregnancy and preggo sex. Maybe my wishes might come true, but for heavens sake, get that English problem solved.

Its by all meassures not really a good game.
Bad writing, or bad translations. Odd transitions and sentences.
Rather poor graphics.
Both style, stances seems like its never really tried before, or taken enough time to make look good.

If this game is made poorly with lack of skills, or extremely fast with no care, it still comes down to it not being good.

I think you hit the jackpot with this game.
There is plenty content and plays great.
Very nice graphics and animations plus the game has gay gameplay.
And gay content in adult games is still very rare.
The game is hot and horny and i like it allready.
5 out of 5 for me.