VN - Ren'Py - Something [v0.9] [Forefinger]

V0.9

Bad lighting ruins everything, but with those models there's not much to ruin. Realy ugly, every single one of them.

The story makes no sense, nothing's explained and you're thrown in without knowing who's who.
MC starts with a GF, which is always a bad idea, with no development nobody's gonna get attached to her, even less so after she says that she's been the town bike for years before MC.
Traps everywhere, kids walking all over MC, the "mother" that looks more like the grandmother and you're left with the knowledge that the only lucky guy isMC's d3ad friend .

I really enjoyed this game a lot. The characters look great and I like that the fetishes and relationships are optional, so you can play the way you prefer.
The story kept me hooked from start to finish, even if I would have liked to see more choices along the way.
The only thing that could be improved right now are the animations. But overall it’s a solid game. 4.5

VERSION: v0.7
SUMMARY: Fair content so far, still needs a good deal of work though.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be.

1. Model Visuals..................... : ⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals................... : ⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)............... : ⭐⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing............ : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........ : ⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics...........: ⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.........: ⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music.....................: ⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.............. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Models are actually good looking, at least some LIs are and they generally look realistic, so not over the top pretty. MC is also not bad, but face can use some work, at least in consistency from one point to another.
2. Animations are pretty decent, the interaction between character bodies could use a bit more polish though.
3. Kinks seem like they will be plenty, or at least from the look of it, the dev is open to a few things, this is good.
4. While characters are not provided much context and background, they do seem to have their own distinct personalities, baggage and such, also a good thing and hopefully the dev builds on this.

CONS:

1. Flickering screen when characters blink or such little animations happen. Guess it has to do with the frames jumping between each other thats not done smoothly?
2. Writing, dialogue needs work, a good amount of work, revision and generally someone that speaks English and can write a decent script should review this.
3. Story needs some context and fleshing out, more preamble and background to characters.
4. Lack of sounds, music, lewd sounds is a big disappointment as it adds to immersion.
5. Basic UI features missing like opacity settings.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer.

• Provided most of my comments in my review above.
• Details like the blinking eyes are great, but need to be reworked to avoid the flashing screen.
• Sounds need to be implemented as they will just provide more immersion.
• Full list of planned kinks will be nice, since pregnancy is an option, I hope the dev will include sex with pregnant woman, not "implied" pregnancy, I mean actually showing, 3 - 5 - 7 months or more down the line. Lactating that actual lactates and stuff like that, saying its happening and having it happen are two totally different things and the latter wins hands down.
• Fair amount of content but not a lot if I am honest, hope there will be more a bit more regularly, but overall not bad.

TLDR:

Overall not a a bad attempt, not great but can break 4 stars easily enough with more polish. I'll re-review later and see how things progress.

2.5-3 out of 5
Story is laughable excuse to avoid yet another teenager living with family and banging his family, This time its ex-military that lives in the house of his killed army friend, investigating friend's killing or whatever, and also banging his family.
Out of respect I guess.
No sound except in the main menu, very akward animations.
Models are mostly OK-ish.
The only kinda unique feature of the game - MC has option so sissify other character, Usually its the other way around. So if thats something you enjoy, your score could be higher

Now how do I start with this game?
1. The English, looks like it went through the Google mixer 3 times
2. The story. Well it sounds rather implausible, but maybe that bad English makes it even more implausible.
3. The characters. They are rather good, there are the usual stereotypes, but all in all OK.
4. The fetishes. Up till now it looks good, can't wait to see what comes in the way of fetishes, would love to see some hard stuff like bdsm, bestiality, humiliation, even pregnancy and preggo sex. Maybe my wishes might come true, but for heavens sake, get that English problem solved.

Its by all meassures not really a good game.
Bad writing, or bad translations. Odd transitions and sentences.
Rather poor graphics.
Both style, stances seems like its never really tried before, or taken enough time to make look good.

If this game is made poorly with lack of skills, or extremely fast with no care, it still comes down to it not being good.

I think you hit the jackpot with this game.
There is plenty content and plays great.
Very nice graphics and animations plus the game has gay gameplay.
And gay content in adult games is still very rare.
The game is hot and horny and i like it allready.
5 out of 5 for me.