VN - Ren'Py - Sophie [Ch. 1 v2.0 Fix] [SerahArt3D]

latest update worst update i have seen ever
dev changed mc model, new model ugly idk why he's changed first model was pretty beautiful and last thing dev added so much characher in game every one look a like each other

Really good begin, i will waiting for more content and spicy scenes. Please, idk if the dev will see my avaliation, but my request is: do many number of renders, like 250+ renders. Mnay number of renders can help with the story and the development of the characters. Good work.

This game had a lot of potential and strengths, but in the second update, it lost its most important feature (the lovable characters' personalities).

FMC:
If going to the neighbor's bathroom is a huge moral mistake, why did she go? If it's not, why did she lie to her husband? Either FMC is very stupid or very slut.

Elizabeth:
I think Elizabeth's potential was wasted. Her introduction, appearance, and character/personality were excellent, but her NTR scene was shown without corruption or any justifiable reasons for betrayal. This lack of explanation damages her character/personality and makes her NTR scene less enjoyable.the sooner her justifiable reasons for betrayal are revealed, the sooner she will regain her value. I think we all agree that NTR is much more enjoyable when we are in love with the Li.

If these two major issues are fixed in the next update, I will definitely increase the rating to 5.

The story is pretty generic and bland. The "plot" is basically just "Hey wife, I bought us an apartment without consulting you in the slightest. It mindbogglingly doesn't have a shower/tub or sink in the bathroom." "Oh hey neighbor, your apartment doesn't have a shower? Use mine!"

The writing would almost be tolerable, except the English is all but unreadable. There really isn't much there yet. One short day with no lewd scene. Despite the NTR tag, this game does not contain any NTR. Technically, it doesn't contain anything sexual at all. Since the MC is the one that will be doing the cheating in the future, this will be a cheating game, but not an NTR game.

The graphics are the strongest part of this game(and the only reason this is not a 1-star review). They're different, and a bit cartoony, but look pretty good overall. Sophie is very cute, with a curvy figure.

There are a few sound effects, but no music, which is disappointing.

The artwork is very nice, but I think something is missing. The story goes smoothly in the first chapter and I hope the heroine doesn't quickly become a whore. The text needs a little work too, or it looks a little cheesy. The game is worthy of attention for connoisseurs of this genre. For now I will put 5 stars and we will look at further development of the project.