Ren'Py - Sorcerer's Paradox [Ch.4] [Ceddot]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    Wicks99

    A reverse isekai visual novel with a decent storyline and a few areas in need of improvement. It provides a good enough playthrough but falls short of standing out from a sea of AVNs with similar themes.

    Story
    MC got reverse isekaied from an alternate feudal Japan universe where sorcery is the norm to the current modern world after being ambushed by sinister forces in his home world. He then joins a mysterious organization that deals with magical and paranormal issues while staying with a bevy of girls. The main plot hasn't fully surfaced as at Chapter 4, so it's hard to tell where the story will eventually head currently.

    The narrative is interesting enough to follow up, but at the same time it's also apparent that the developer has certain shortcomings when it comes to storytelling and pacing. For a start, the game doesn't handle dramatic and highly emotional moments well. MC's sudden realization of having isekaied, finally meeting up with Uru, learning the deaths of his home world wives etc. ended up rather stale and uneventful despite the opportunity to stir up powerful emotions with players.

    Another aspect that needs a relook is the tendency to introduce multiple perspectives in an unfettered and directionless manner. Paradox interjects its narrative with multiple perspectives from a myriad of characters that are sometimes not only meaningless but disruptive to the overall flow.

    For e.g. Sky's perspective is not only redundant, but also dampens any surprise that players could have felt role playing as the MC. Ditto some of the scenes from Audrey's and Mae's POV, all they do is unveil critical plot points over early and by the time their ripple effects hit MC, players are unperturbed having been "warned" much earlier.

    There are also numerous micro perspective switches to LIs as they carry out ordinary activities and indulge in general banter, these slow down the story pacing unnecessarily and don't do much in character development either.

    Game Mechanic
    Kinetic novel with some choices that allow players to reject a particular LI.

    Background / Character Renders
    Background and characters are made with HS2 to good effect. Paradox features the occasional panorama zoom out and camera panning non-sexual scene which is a welcome feature that builds up the immersion. Generally most of the LIs are well designed with characters like Jill, Tina, Audrey and Pyra fitting into their roles.

    However, the way the renders are presented during action and fight scenes leave much to be desired. Instead of using a combination of text, sound effects and abrupt change in scene to highlight high impact sequences, the game tries to present them by doing a collage of pics depicting a fast action sequence. The problem is these renders change slowly resulting in a comical stock motion of a guy slowmo leaping towards the enemy and casting magic. Not ideal.

    Character Development
    It's above average for an adult game - the MC and LIs are more than two dimensional and there is quite a bit of effort made to breathe life into them.

    However as previously mentioned, many of the emotionally raw scenes are too short and bland to do justice to the characters. Other than that, Tina's characterization as a playful nymph, Uru as a loyal companion and Audrey as the pragmatic leader is well crafted, hopefully others will be filled up in later chapters.

    Sex Scenes
    Most of the scenes as of Chapter 4 are focused on Tina and they are very well done - some pretty unique camera angles and animations which combined with Tina's playful and teasing nature makes for a sexy experience.

    However, those with minor characters are rather unoriginal HS2 stock and some of them even have animations that need rework e.g. Celestia's pounding in the bathroom is weirdly angled and Jill's doggy is too stiff and unnatural.

    All in I would say the lewd scenes are a mixed bag ranging from very good to ordinary to bad, hopefully the developer can maintain standards like Tina's for the rest of the characters in the future.

    BGM and Sound Effects
    The BGMs are mostly complimentary though I wish they can be applied more consistently throughout game play - right now it's around 50% background white noise and 50% BGMs which makes the playing experience somewhat choppy as sound levels alternate all the time. SFX is minimal but good enough.

    Conclusion
    Paradox has a good story to keep players going, but the pacing needs to be better controlled and alternate perspectives need to be used judiciously for a specific purpose less they turn disruptive. The sex scenes could do with more quality control, but the good ones with Tina are worth the wait. An all-in high 3s to 4.0 star experience for me.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    gino.pilotino

    the game starts slowly. as it progresses it becomes more and more intriguing. the characters are not trivial. The story is also very engaging. It's one of those games that keeps you glued and you don't click just to go from one sex scene to another. I found it addictive and hope it won't be abandoned.

    Good job.
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 7705548

    At first game looks ok, but when you play it's pretty decent, but when you finish ch1 and start ch2 you will say awesome!!!

    I'm really tired of wimp MC, but in this game MC is pretty decent yeah a bit perverted but it's all part of the harem, really love the slow burn incest it's good dev isn't rushing this incest "thingy", I really like the animation both in H scenes and fight scenes, fighting scenes is just Mmm.............

    Anyway game is really good, honestly I'm not the type of person who likes game easily because of wimpy/weak MC and bitchy love interest.

    But in this game no bitchy lis, badass MC, awesome story, every lis is optional I think, what's more you want?

    Just download the game man!!!!!

    What are you waiting for?
  4. 2.00 star(s)

    MikesDK

    Story was just not my taste, its yet another amnesia start like so many other games, so nothing really new and theres nothing meaning full to do since theres really no choices atleast none that matters.

    Its also a kinetic story if you dont follow the route game wants you to its just game-over and you dont even have any kind of controle over relationships either so you just end up fucking everything like or hate em, this also means fetishes are forced so yeah alot of things just lowers the value of this game.

    Dialogs can be weird and cringy which dosent help the overall feel either.
    Theres no relationship build up or anything its just a mindless and pointless fuckfest, really the worst type of game for my taste.

    Girls looks ok but i hate big tit fetish and its something you cant avoid since all LIs are forced which only results in game being a turn-off.

    Animations are ok nothing special but ok.

    Sandbox is just pointless and can barely be called a sandbox, guessing its just there so dev dont have to add a kinetic tag which is idiotic since plenty of people enjoy kinetic games.
  5. 3.00 star(s)

    mahlerbestcomposer97

    Again, this rating system does not allow half star otherwise this would be 3.5+ but I cannot yet justify a 4 stars at this point, so I round it down to 3.

    First off, the female models are decent enough. Tina is one of the sweetest looking bae I've seen in many AVNs. Others also have their unique designs and appearances, some sexy some hot some cute. There are some really decent movie style animations in some cutscenes. So the dev is clearly capable in the technical department and I can feel the efforts he put into making these female models and animations. There are already some sex scenes and they are really vanilla default HS2 stuffs. A bit of gameplay (freeroam) and some choices but really nothing impactful yet.

    Writing and the story is a big issue on the other hand. Reading this is like reading an outdated 1980 Japanese manga (and that is in no way a compliment) where you see all the cliche and tropes that make your eyes roll over:

    -Overly arrogant MC that got defeated because he is... overly arrogant.

    -Resurrection in a new era and pretend to get amnesia.

    -Spent long paragraphs explaining some minor settings like powers and magic.

    -Awkward interactions and cringe dialogues between characters.

    -Over simplify progression of story. Everything just happen without any reasons or inner thoughts or deep consideration reflecting character's personality.

    -New characters keep on popping up but add nothing to the story. Bunch of side characters mixed up with main cast making it messy in terms of relationship and story telling.

    And I can go on and on with this list. It is clear that this game has gotten heavy influences from japanese Anime which can be good but most of the time - really bad. It is just taking all the bad essence from this genre and coating it with some linear clicking gameplay. So all you got is really a bad anime that you can interact somewhat with. And personally I have very very low tolerance level to these cringe anime tropes.

    Maybe the writing will get better over times; maybe it will not. Maybe this is those kind of game that you will better off get a gallery unlocker mods and forget about the story. Because it honestly give you headache to read through the mess.
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    saiko422

    The plot is good and interesting, the H scenes are really great, the girls are beautiful.
    The plot is definitely the highlight of this game, it attracted me to read it instead of skipping.
    Many female characters with different personalities and their own highlights. Just wanted to say it's a great game and love it
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    Lucas Robert da silva

    Game is really amazing there is no doubt about it. It take little bit of time to popular.
    I'm really enjoying it so far, the story is interesting, it looks pretty good. It looks promising.
    I really liked it and I'm going to give it 5 stars. I can't wait for the story to develop.
  8. 2.00 star(s)

    Silentlord85

    version - Ch3. P1

    i tried it, played i think a good portion of it, but i just cant go on.

    Firstly, its a not a bad game, atleast to the part i stopped at. yes some minor stuff like spelling and grammer, nothing ground-breaking.

    story is, interesting, looks pretty good, abit dated but good.

    but for me, the reason i have given it 2 stars is... what is going on with the camera? its like the FOV slider is cranked all the way down to fisheye mode. almost every scene the camera focus is stretching anf squishing the background and chars. its jarring and actually making my eyes go funny.

    i have 2k screen, so i dunno if thats making it worse or not. never had this issue before. tried fullscreen and full-screen windowed. whats annoying is, the preview pics in the thread, look normal.

    Sorry, ive tried it, but i cant carry on. dunno if its a bad version or what. checked the threads and see no one else mentioning this. so take this review with a pinch of salt.

    i can only comment on my experience of the game i got.
    for me its unplayable and hurting my eyes, the fisheye nature is just too much.
  9. 3.00 star(s)

    InstaPrincess

    Not sure about this one. The art is dated, strangely distorted sometimes and the angles are weird. It makes me want to back up from the monitor.

    The story takes long and is often just not very interesting / inconsequential.

    Many of the characters seem to have no role and little character. There's generally too many women with too little screen time.

    Also, the (everpresent) oversized breasts make me eyeroll so bad, that I am afraid I have permanently damaged my eyes by now. "Lola" will fall over trying to stand straight. NO WOMAN looks like that. It's juvenile and irritating.

    On the other hand, sometimes, the story works and some characters are written reasonably well to be interesting.

    Meh.
  10. 4.00 star(s)

    Elfnutter

    Hi, Dev
    This is my 2nd review as you know.
    First of all I want to say that your game is amazing. Why?
    1. The most interesting thing that caught my eye is MC.
    MC's really cool and I like powerful mc, it's a good thing that not some typical MC like:- horny teenager, degenerate, weak ass beat up by some school girls that's the most irritating thing.
    2. Story is really good I really really like superpower type stories, it's remind me of some of my favourite animes.
    3. The LIs is good looking also milf it's good.
    4. Well, graphic's not that high quality but fine by me.
    5. Action & lewd scenes, action with animation it feels like I'm literally watching anime, VNs without violence I don't like much & your game action scenes surely is nice I like it very much and lewd scenes I really don't care much about lewd scenes but with lewd scenes it's makes your fucking good without lewd scenes I don't even called this "Visual novel" in this game lewd scenes is obviously good when LI's is good looking and with animation that's surely makes some eye candy.
    Overall I'll give you 7.5/10.
    I try to support you as much as possible.
    Best wishes from me.
    Good luck.❤❤❤
  11. 4.00 star(s)

    Neterozoid

    4.5/5 so far,ch1 was good,but honestly ch2 feels too short,not a lot happening story wise and sex scenes wise,i would really like to progress the story n get closer to the main girls,but other than that,game is gr8,definitely one to look out for,and for future updates,pls dont make it too "sandboxy" like other vn,ur style of sandbox is more of exploration/unlocking scenes types of sandbox which i love,cus u actually have gameplay n things to do,n i hope in the future,we have diff paths/outcome based on whatever we decide,thanks for all ur hard work
  12. 3.00 star(s)

    harem.king

    v. ch2-hotfix1
    Meh.
    The idea is creative enough, a reverse isekai.
    A medieval sorcerer gets isekaied into modern day earth (or a world like it).
    Hints that he actually travelled into the future instead of to a different world. (although MC explicitly believes he is in a different world).

    The 3d art is rather dated looking.
    English is mediocre.
    Dialog, plot, and pacing are rather stilted and awkward.
    Things just move slowly and I am finding myself bored.
    It isn't bad... but I did drop it.