VN - Ren'Py - Sort of Justice [Ch.2 v0.2.1] [Creator Tom]

I was actually surprised with how much I really enjoyed this.

Renders/Models - Great nothing to complain about other than some of the male models looking fairly similar. 9/10.

Story - While not being an original story/plot, the execution is what sets it miles apart from others. I love that even though the MC is a very good fighter, he isn't some over confident giga Chad. 9.5/10.

Writing - The writing so far is very well done imo, no over dramatic inner monologue or dragged out conversations. The dialogs flows well enough and gets the scenes points across without all the extra fluff. 9.5.10.

The only downside is that we are still very early into the main story so we're going have to wait and see how it progresses and if the dev and keep up the quality delivered so far.

Short, but with a lot of potential.

Genuinely interesting and reasonably original story - no college\returning home\'stepmother' tropes here - huzzah! Pacing and dialogue are spot on. Render and model quality is great, albeit the latter being orientated towards voluptuous figures at this point (not a problem for me ).

Only one sex scene at this point in the version I played but it is well set up and executed and the associated animation quality is outstanding.

English is a bit clunky throughout. Would be worth the dev engaging an English speaking proof reader for future updates. A bit more choice would also be nice - things are quite kinetic at this point, although I didn't really notice this too much due to the interesting and well executed plot.

Enjoyed playing through this one and looking forward to future updates. A possible five-starrer down the track.

Oh man i just feel like i played a movie,this was so fucking good and exciting,the action scenes,the dialogue,the plot and the charathers are really nicely done,to bring such an imersion experience like this is really something special,you are doing something really good here,i am very excited for more of this story,have a nice day

English is a bit off, grammar mistakes come up throughout, but the story is interesting, and the girls are all attractive in their own ways. Pretty interesting premise, I will be playing the next chapter!

Edited and moving it up to 5 stars!

I absolutely love how this chapter played out. It was self-contained, it had a beginning, middle, and end, with a very satisfying conclusion, no spoilers, but I enjoyed how badass the MC is, but even he has people above him.

Very interesting game.
Story progression and character depth are so far great.
Pleasantly surprised of the uniqueness of the characters as well.
I'll be following this one closely in the future, truly keep up the good work!

Sort of justice [v0.1.2]
If you enjoy action movies you gonna enjoy this game. This is the kind of story I love too see filled with action. Fights, gun, blood. Dev did a good job in fighting sequences there is also sound effects too. Story is thrilling, mysterious and filled with action. Don't let the kinetic tag disappoint you. There are choices so you can choose which girl you want to sex with. Many things about the story is not revealed yet. We have to wait and see

+ Action ( fight, gun, blood)
+ Story
+ Sound effects

Overall i enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates.

Version : v0.1.2

I don't like to give games 5 stars when there is barley any content. However I enjoyed the hell out of this so much I can't wait for more. It was so action packed reminded me of any action tv series I cant wait for more of.

It is a Kinetic Novel but it does have some choices like being able to turn down a girl. So id say probably just the story is Kinetic and that's it but hard to say this early on.

This is for sure one of those games I cant wait for more of because it has alot of potential from just the 1st chapter. If you enjoy story driven games and alot of actions give this one a try.

Review for v0.1.0
Well this game has quite the interesting story. Pretty unique, but unfortunately very unrealistic. It just does not happen that u can put someone in jail like that. Also being in prison for seven years should also be quite the experience. This part of the MC's life is skipped completely. It would really add to the hatred of the deceiver if we get to see what the MC had to actually go through. It feels like a big missed oppurtunity.

I did get annoyed by a single choice option (click on the letter of Adam in the cafetaria). I'ts only one right now, but its absolutely useless. I don't understand why some devs think it is a good idea to add these. Its just annoyting and hopefully it gets removed and we do not get more of these single choice option. They just ruin the flow of the story.

At least there are some interesting charachters. Especially Samantha, she is pretty mysterious. Most of the time with charachters like her you do get some information or emotion from them so that u can form some sort of feeling about them. As of now she is just very sassy/b*tchy towards the MC because she does not want him to be a liability or something like that. However he has shown that he is not a liability perse but this does nothing to her behaviour towards the MC. At least some surprise or interest would make sense and shows that she's more than just sassy.

As for the visuals. Decent, the graphics are average I would say. All in all, I cant give it more than 3 stars. I was close to giving it 2 stars, but its a first release so lets be lenient.

Sort of Justice is an adult visual novel with kinetic elements that offers some choices throughout the narrative. The developer aimed to create a game with an intense and action-packed storyline, centered around an ordinary man who, after being betrayed by a coworker, is unjustly imprisoned for seven years. Upon release, he embarks on a path of revenge, with the game focusing on deep character development, highlighting the protagonist's transformation from a kind person to someone hardened by his experiences.

The game features engaging action and combat sequences that enrich the narrative and keep players immersed. Visually, it is impressive, with high-quality graphics and diverse character designs, though the animations are still basic and could be improved.

While "Sort of Justice" includes some sensual scenes, its primary focus is on telling a rich story, which may not appeal to those expecting more explicitly adult content. However, it offers a personalized experience, allowing players to skip sex scenes if they wish.

Overall, "Sort of Justice" combines intense action, an engaging plot, and memorable characters to create a unique and promising experience. The first version already presents substantial content, setting itself apart from typical games with themes of revenge and mystery. The game has great potential, and it is hoped that the developer will continue to refine and expand the experience based on player feedback.

This is might be an absolute gem.


Story:

The start of this story was crazy, the MC and Scarlett seemed like this cute brewing romance and then.. BOOM! She sets you up and you end up doing 7 years in prison. Sad part is that things like this happens to poor unsuspecting schmoes in real life. I appreciate the writing of the MC the most. Before he's more gentle and easy going but after his prison sentences you can see the changes in his demeanor. He's more... hardened as he should be.

You're working with Adam and his crew, of course, he's not trustworthy at all and clearly there's a motive with him that involves the MC.

The fighting scenes was awesome. I imagine that's not easy to do in a AVN but they were enjoyable nonetheless. The characters so far seem very detailed and well written. Can't wait to see where this goes, hopefully Ava and the MC get reacquainted in the future. Her story was pretty sad and I think that she and MC can benefit each other.

Renders:
Great.

Models/Characters:
Top of the shelf. Malena is goated.

Dialogue/Grammar:
Great-ish

Overall:

Whatever the Dev is selling, I'm buying. Best of luck and I hope this takes off. Almost forget.. Fuck Scarlett!

The truth is that the game looks very good, the renders, the characters are 10 good, leaving aside Samanta's bitch who would practically send her to be lost to a forest , of course this at the moment and because of her shitty personality, For other hand the other girls are 10, especially the redhead (personally redheads are my weakness) she is in the top 1, that's where Doc is, who is a little younger than Mel, although it remains to be seen what she is like on a personal level, the hotdog girl (hehehe xD) and the police look good and the delinquent girl would be a little less, but like the Doc, it remains to be seen what they are like, The girl from the fast food restaurant, I hope she is also among the (LIs), because seeing her in her waitress outfit makes you want to spend everything on fast food (hahaha).

The unforced options are very good at the moment, I hope it continues like this and doesn't change.

Now it's time to wait for the next update, because it has potential and I hope you don't pay for the game Mr. DEV, because I'm already anxiously waiting to see how we slowly and painfully get revenge on that treacherous bitch Scarlett

A plot that's beyond idiotic brought to you with more typos than you could count. And it has no ear for dialogue. And the characters are flat. And so are the renders. And it has a lame, whimpy main character.

VERSION: 0.1.0
SUMMARY: Great game, play it!

PROS:

1. Very nice looking models
2. Interesting with intriguing plot that keeps the player vested in the story.
3. Characters are complex and have depth, MC is not some beta
4. Well written and structured, flows nicely and events are strung together well, making the game more than just the lewd.
5. Lewd scenes are few (so far) but decent.
6. Action scenes are pretty cool, done nicely and the fighting sequences are pretty damn good.

CONS:

1. Lewd is not (so far) something that there is much of, based on the game story and if the current state is any indication, lewd will be there but the game is much more focused on story. This is not a bad thing though, but less lewd is not exactly a plus point either (may change in future)
2. Animations are basic, nothing exceptional, there are a few games out there that do a much better job, even on the modeling side of things. This is unfortunate because the game does deserve more

TLDR: Great story, pacing and decent lewd albeit not much of it. Great action scenes with lots of potential. I hope to see more of this quality work as the game develops. 5 stars for whats here, story nailed it for me.

GREAT START! Can't wait to see where this one goes! I feel like no one the MC has encountered can be trusted even in the slightest. I will say this, even a slight hint as to wtf is going on would be appreciated. Too much mystery causes one to lose interest but I'm definitely here for what I'm seeing right now.

For being the first update its really enjoyable, renders are good and the story is intriguing so far. I like that there is action scenes in the first update and I hope future updates keep the same pace, so far the characters are likable and and I am interested to see whats up with this MC.
The 1 scene thats in the update was decent, had good dialog which is a big plus, and it was decently fluid. Hopefully the devs learns and just keep improving them.
Deff a VN I will be keeping an eye on and if updates seem steady enough deff a project I would support

Not my kind of game, but certainly not bad quality.

The renders are decent and the english level and writing are fine too. The plot mainly revolves around gang violence and the women are just incidental. I personally prefer games focused around the women with incidental scenes to flesh out the plot. This kind of setup leaves very little freedom for the player to be in control.

All of the women I've seen this far are unattractive and badly proportioned for my tastes, although there is a blonde in the banner who i didnt encounter

review on 0.1:

TOP NOTCH!
Solid start, top renders, excellent writing, cufing story, some of the very best fighting scenes i ever experienced in such a game and attractive girls/women.
Maybe only a few more animations would be the "cherry on the cake", but this game has a lot of "calories" even without that - so it's just about to find ANYTHING "bad" about this gem.

After playing countless adult games , i may be entitled to say that this one is outstanding (so far).

Seeing that other games out there got 5 stars, this one certainly deserves 10 compared to them I know that a lot players are following me over here, so i just advice to them: "CHECK THIS ONE OUT!!!".
This is instantly one of my all-time favorites (which happens barely, if not at all).

Well done!

Man, what a game!! This has potential to be a great VN. All are going simultaneously well. So hot characters. MC is fine as well. Great story, I love this kind of mafia and crime stories. Congratulations to the dev and best of luck

For the first version, I couldn't have liked the beginning more, the best of the year for me, perhaps because it is a kinetic novel some people don't give it a chance but it's worth it, for my part I prefer this type of stories to a vacuum .

Visually I liked it, the female characters especially, they are varied and each one with a marked personality, my favorite was Samantha, both for her appearance and for her rude and mysterious attitude, I am curious to know more about her and how she will trust more and more in our MC over time. I also liked the facial expressions, and the fights are perfectly understandable with images.

I found some strange things in the text, for example: incomplete words, but I could understand everything perfectly although my native language is not English so it doesn't bother me, I read all the dialogues without skipping any and it never got boring.

The story entertained me a lot, for a 0.1 version it has a lot of content, if I had to describe this beginning it would be like the first 2 chapters of an action series, with dirty deals, revenge and characters whose secrets will be revealed little by little, including the 7 years that our MC spent in prison, told in a way that reminded me of the beginnings of "Arrow", I liked the comedy, well measured and not all the characters use it, it is also important to note that sex can be rejected , perfect for people who don't like X character or want to do a "monogamy run."

Being the first version, I can't know if the updates will come out every 3 months or take 1 year, I hope it's the first case because it started out interesting, I will have faith in the Dev, I hope it keeps its initial vision clear and the negative reviews (which there will always be in any story) do not make him change his course. Good luck Dev!