VN - Ren'Py - Spartan [Ep1Ch1] [SEGPStudio]

So far pretty bad. Hopefully will change/improve.

Certainly needs to be proofread.
"But after the disaster, lord need money, not slaves"
"So you was sold second time,"
"All you life was traded for stack of coins."
"Then, they married and live happy, until hunger"

and so forth....

Nice colors/images/characters but they are all Ai so it doesn't really count.

Better luck next time.

V. prologue

art. basic AI junk. some odd imagery as expected so dev has not used quality control. basically just a slideshow. unappealing

writing (haha) is machine translated english making it very uncomfortable to read. it is all kinds of wrong and very few sentences make sense.

there is nothing here, not even a mere glimmer, to show this developer is not in it purely for money and started with no real idea. they tried to deliver a premise but it is barely delivered as the release is seriously short.
what it does deliver is erratic.

even some of the tags are a lie
not something i will ever return to

If I could give -5 I would. Here is just a hole lot of nonsense in a whole lot of nothing.

It is pretty hard to create this kind of rubbish IMO, not when you have so many other games here that you can even poach ideas from...LAZY

What is there is written is just simply BAD. You can't expect support for this kind of effort.

SKIP!