RPGM - Abandoned - Special Request [v0.7] [Nemiegs]

If you're a fan of humilitation, corruption and blackmail, this one is for you! The preview pictures doesn't really do it justice. The start seems a little wacky, but hold on through that, and the game is a true gem!

this game could be easily the better fashion business just the mc could be hotter and at least a but curvier.

Pros:
- solid quality
- very helpful questlog
- even its rpgmaker its not too hard to navigate
- good english (better than mine )
- female as protagonist
- hot kinks
- old guys who look old
- ugly guys who look hideous (and kind of funny)
- some hot outfits
- interesting very blackmailish/corruptive and quite dark story
- beatrice (thats the name of the blond girl, right? really like her face and hair and style way more than mc's tbh)
- hot animations

Cons:
- maybe a bit too dark story or could get too dark? idk
- some sounds are just too much
- mc is pretty and not too thin but pretty in a bit boring way in my opinion
- mc has nice areolas/nipples but the breasts look a but odd. not only sometimes small and a bit flat but also strange positioned sometimes, hips could be a bit wider, ass a either chubbier or more trained aswell as the thighs/legs but legs can also be left like this but ass and especially breasts... idk man - the face is pretty but i tend to like beatrice`s (the blond oprhan girl) more also i really dig the kneesock/short stuff of beatrice personally.
heck even leina has more curves than the mc even according to abraham she should be chubbier and less curvy in a fit way...
- animations are not skippable you have to wait till its over
- too many same stuff (always showering and the dress part is creative and fun the first few times but then gets annoying in my opinion)
- some story stuff/characters are bit too strange for me atm like the nut girl for example (which also had more curves than the mc...)

even i gave the game 4 stars for me personally its a very close 4 stars and more a 3.6 or 3.8. cause the mc is okay but doesn't carry the game for me. its more the animations and the potential encounters/kinks and the quality stuff like questlog and solid renders.

The images dont look exactly good.
Some guy comes with pictures but another guy knows about them. The thing about blackmail is having leverage. In this case its about not wanting the pictures disclosed, but at least there is one guy that comes right after the previous one that already knows about them, plus the stippers, and the bartender. And she is a smart woman.... For me this is a case of borderline bad writing.

The female mc is married to a guy but first scene is a handjob, second scene is a blowjob....,a dn the third scene you see it in pictures.
After that basically everything and everyone is against th female MC, adn at some point there is a game over.
At some point all the Female MC does is fucking and working as a whore, but they blackmailed her to get her name or supprt to sell something. Well in the end she just works as a whore for everyone. I cant turn off my brain, and eveything makes me cringe since that white haired guy came knowing about the pictures.

The sex scenes are there, but i dont feel anything special, they are not that great to make clic in my brain. and other places. Also the serious theme (blackmail, abuse rape) is showered with this clownish sounds. I ahve seen other games that do better at this female "oppressed" MC.
And i played the Renpy that has a more smooth gameplay.

This game is absolutely amazing among all the lacustrine today game choice.
Nice blackmail, story and plot make sense, character is very pretty.

Good hardcore and rape scene, definitely is my top 5.

The only thing I would change, I would port this on Rempy platform.. but it question of taste.. not really a cons

A really great game for lovers of blackmail, and forced choices. Beautiful professional female MC is forced to cooperate with degrading activities more and more.

- Pro:
- Good quality scenes, some of them moving/animated
- Easy to play: quest log and arrows on ground tell you exactly what to do (do NOT explore the maps/talk to people, as it is NOT an open world RPG)
- Sexy MC, with more or less believable dialogues in which she continues to abhorr what is happening, but mostly does not have a choice
- Really good as a blackmail game
- As of februari 2021, the maker seems engaged in this forum and is busy on expanding the game

- Con:
- I was very disappointed to find out the game is not finished, as so far most scenes are rather *tame* or vanilla. There is a great build up of sexual tension, but only with the expectation that things will go FAR worse for her. Which as of version 0.5 is not the case (yet)
- And in tie with that: The corruption and degradation of the MC is very slow. Sometimes I was disappointed that she wasn't subjected to some stronger submission/penetration/sex acts

Still a very good blackmail/corruption game, with a bit believable dialogues

Really worth getting into. It is blackmail focused so a lot of people would be put off. Even me to some extent but because there's clear attempts to indicate character corruption, it feels like the main character is changing. It becomes less blackmail-centric all the way through and gradually more of the main character doing things for her own reasons to gather strength to fight back.

Art 10/10
Story/Setup 10/10
Animations 9/10 though i think they're sometims redundant but when they are there they are good quality

RPGM mechanics used (i.e. could this have just been made in Renpy)
-Really detailed world. wish everything could be on 1 singular map but I can see why the dev chose not to make it so.
-Side quests at some locations (v. few at the moment but long side-quests are nice)

tbh could be made in renpy but i'm glad it isnt since the world is nice to look at and there aren't any really annoying location positions. (i.e. not much travel time).

My favorite games are ones like this where the player makes choices to get MC into maximum trouble, but it the choices MC makes seem reasonable. The universe assists the player in getting MC into PLENTY of trouble and keeping her there. This is currently the game I'm most excited for updates on. 9/10

This is a great game that is really good for a porn game and one of the best for its specific genre.
There is a lot of misunderstanding of this type of game and I see the same bad reviews over and over for other games like this.
This is a game like Lily of the Valley or Anna's Exciting Affection and Elena's Life.
They are always very similar and there is nothing wrong with this, as this is why we play them!
Its all about a female protag, humiliation or humiliation with corruption and similar tags.
If the game was like real life they would NEVER get snared in the web of blackmail, lies or good intentions gone wrong etc.
That is the fucking point. Its a game and we dont want it to be like real life, we enjoy the protags misadventures!
Its so sad to see people come and review the game and rip into it for the exact thing its meant to be and do!

Maybe we need a new tag to distinguish these type of games, because this game is a gem for an early release!

Back to the review here, and there is a ton of quality content for a game I just saw released (or where was it hiding!?)
It blows games that have been stinging us on for years with this new release.
The art is amazing, and characters lovable (as in we love to see them humiliated heh but anyway).
in most of these types of games the protag has one or 2 outfits they were over and over but here the author has given her a new outfit almost every day!!
Each outfits are unique and amazing. Hot hot hot hot.
Such attention to detail shows in other areas.
But forget all that the porn is awesome too!
Pacing almost spot on, maybe could be a bit slower but this way i think the author will actually finish the game soon.
I am 3 hours in and not done yet.

Thank you for a wonderful game!
Keep it up.

The art work is good it isn't the best but it sits above the mean.

The plot itself is good. However, the execution of the plot is dismal and that's being nice. That said this isn't a final product and the issues I discuss below can be solved, keep that in mind if you read beyond this point. My criticism may seem a bit harsh but I am intending to provide constructive and honest feedback.

On a technical note the game is more suited for Renpy. The use of RPGM on it is a waste. In it just sucks up time going from place to place. You have few real alternatives.


There are far to many conflicting issues in the way the plot is executed to start with.

Main Character Female protaganist who is supposed to be best marketing manager around. That's why she is sought after by the villain of the story. In short she is smart and talented and good looking. She's also is portrayed as having strong morals and ethics. (visiting helping orphans...).

The most obvious conflict comes in that she acts like a total moron in the story. She doesn't have enough sense to get a speeding ticket on the way home to get out of the contract. That was actually hinted to by the BB the villain.

She has absolutely no reason at all to agree to the contract because it would jeprodise the very things she is going along with it to protect. That being her marriage, reputation, job and moral self worth. She's already lost her job because of this. So she only has left reputation and marriage and her morality the Special Requests would cost her all of those. (Keep reading I'll prove it)

Special requests:
The authors only thought here is pregnancy and making her more horny. He completely ignores STDs. The fact that people could request videos or pictures themselves and they didn't put any limits on this. So by leaving it open like that there is no way in hell someone with her supposed brains and knowledge would ever sign a contract like that or agree in a million fucking years. Why the hell would she? She is going to end up exactly in the same spot.

The author further treats the woman as a complete idiot by ignoring she could easily recorded any number of the encounters and that would have been her proof. End of story. Even with the cops and metal detectors and X-ray systems and physical searches even a child can by pass the best of it. I know that for a fact I seen it done.

X-ray systems can't detect wiring that is smaller than the resolution that is visible on the monitors. Metal detectors require a certain amount of metal to detect it the amount is different depending on the type of metal. Which is why metal detectors you use for looking for lost shit has a bunch of adjustments you can make to look for different types of metals. Security metal detectors are usually tuned to metals they find in weapons. People don't generally make guns of gold and silver or other soft metals.

That's a small fraction of the issues I found at this point with the plot. But it covers one of the biggest.

This story would have made vastly more sense if the person was a clueless uneducated protagonist. Shift the job to they need a promotional model and the protagonist is a high school drop out wannabee thot that the villain is lusting after. Her boy friend is managing her online presence because she isn't capable.

The author clearly put a good bit of effort into the story so I can't chalk this issue up to him being lazy or just trying to drive the story and not caring about it. So I to chalk this up to him writing beyond his means. That said the story is beyond most writers potential. There are just to many issues to fully account for them in a reasonable manor. You might do something like this in a 300 plus page novel but for a VN it isn't going to fit well.

Given the amount of explaining or ways needed to prevent these issues. It would just be vastly more things to go wrong if you are a criminal. The best criminal activities are the ones that are simple the less there is to go wrong the less chance it fails. That also can be applied to the story. You can sell the story easier if you don't have to spend 20 pages explaining why this and t hat can't be done by here. At that point you may as well write a novel and to hell with the pictures.

Ok, I will go a little further. Not only is there no reason for her to sign the contract and agree it wouldn't be in BB(the villains) interest to do this regardless of any sexual or other ulterior motives he might have. He wants this company to work and start making money. Why would he risk his cash cow now that he has her? He wouldn't. His brother while not wanting to get involved in crime also might start seeing him as a liability and have him taken out. That's happened more than a few times in RL.

Currently the way the story is written there is ZERO believe-ability and immersion in it. I would have to loose 50 IQ points and stop school around the 5th grade to accept it the way it is.

Even if the author fixes the smaller issues I mentioned it wouldn't amount to 10% of the issues that would still need to be dealt with. His best bet is to change the character descriptions.

Take the thot I mentioned above sure BB could get her in with black mail but he could easily keep her with other opportunities and she would be vastly more willing to demoralize herself to get some place she thinks is better. Hell it doesn't have to be a thought a spokes model would work. Not all of them are that stupid but I have met a good number that are and they would just see this as part of the price of doing business or if done write a step up. Specially given the pay increase.

The current protagonist on the other hand would have to hate her marriage, not give to fucks about her family and what others thought of her from the get go to ever sign that agreement. The idea she would have to go along with it for some time to find evidence that she could have gotten by recording the interview is beyond stupid. It would only take one Special request to destroy everything she is trying to protect the risk is vastly to high.

That said there is an alternative to changing the character type. BB brings her into the company exempts her permanently from all the risk issues. Makes her an effective partner. Gradually he exposes her over time and gets her involved in doing stuff to other females and coming up with ideas.
You use this to build up her corruption and loose concern with loosing family or she becomes more arrogant thinking she can get away with more stuff. At some point then she finds her own interest in fulfilling requests from her own depravity.

At the current state of the game version 0.45 the story isn't worth wasting time reading. Hold down the mouse button power through it and just click the stuff you need to move on and see the scenes.

To point out how stupid the current story line is she could totally fuck up BB's plans by telling him, "Fuck you I rather kill myself then the cops you so much don't want investigating you will come asking question." She could have told him that on the phone when he called her after giving her boss the info or even when he visited her and showed her the photos. Think about it she is in a multi story building she walks over opens a window or uses a chair to break it then threatens to jump. Even if she doesn't kill herself the cops are going to come and investigate. BB's plans are purely fucked not just controlling her but all of them.

Update 3/18/2021
The author has added some more interesting content and the images are good. However, he still has done nothing to fix the major issues in the story such as plot holes.

Corruption game done right, strong recommendation if you are fan of the genre. Renders look well and dev skill is improving, Scenes are hot and there is even some thougth put in story.
Its rpgm but you spend little time walking around. 0.4 took me 2,5 hour to complete

A very much promising game with an incredible hot female MC. Moreover the story has a lot potential. There aren't much games with such tags like blackmail or humiliation. All in all a great game, which deserves to be more popular.

It´s a great game. Laura is a very beautiful and hot young woman.
The sex scenes are very convincing. The version of corruption /blackmailing is of course hottest. Every girls are hot and beautiful I can not wait for every new sexual adventure of a beautiful Laura.

My Rating for is: B+

Pros:
+ Graphics Great
+ Characters Great
+ Different Ages
+ Long Playing time
+ Nice Story
+ Fantastic Animations
+ Beautiful Female MC

Cons:
- Waiting for next update

Conclusion:
Even though I,m not a RPGM fan, I must say that I love this Game....
There is no Senseless walking or driving around, you have lots of characters of different ages in this game without getting lost.
The Animation are very Hot, and the Story of blackmail fits in just perfect.
The female MC is hot,love her white knee socks.....
Something else I love about this Game is that you have lots of places to go without getting boring.
This might even be my first RPGM that I will be supporting.

Overall:
A Hot Story, Great Characters.
Story is pretty good.
Definitely worth the Download.

The RPGM actually works well so far, due to fast traveling and not walking long distances. Car disappeared on me a couple times. The MC tells her friends about the possibility of being drugged at the party early on and gets the same repetitive responses from every single friend that it's a bit annoying. Their needs to be more user choices for the MC going forward to allow for both good and bad paths.

The premise of the game is interesting, the MC is cute, but can't say the same for the rest of the cast especially those neckbeard kids.

The game does have choices here and there. The controls are a little janky, you have clothing options which I like, the game can be vague as what it wants you to do or where to go and this doesn't help the fact that the game is buggy.

I got stock in the city because my car suddenly disappeared and had to reload a previous save file., so save a lot.

The game has lot's of dialogue, could have used Ren'py. But RPGM gets the job done so it's a matter of personal taste I guess.

Overall interesting, but needs more polish.

Very promising so far.
Story is ok, graphics are very nice and for some reason I find Laura super gorgeous.
I hope this game will have meaningful choices and you will be able to choose the path for Laura (corruption versus brave heroin for instance).

Beautiful MC, nice Story. It seems like a corruption game with a more logical behavior of the female main protagonist, than most of the other games. It's not a dumb or trustless wife, which spreads her legs for the first hobo within the first part of the game. For the graphics effort, there are better games out there, but i like these kind of corruption games with a female protagonist.