HTML - Completed - Spirit's Secret [v0.0.9] [a_furbyz]

It's marked as "completed" but it really isn't. The story is badly written (and unfinished), the dialogues are terrible, the plot itself makes no sense. The porn is arbitrary even for a porn game, there's no real build up to it, even the corruption mechanic isn't really there. The only positive is that the scenes are good, but if there's no decent game or story around them, there's no point in not just watching them on Pornhub.

the story was enjoyable and fun - until the ending, which then proceeds to absolutely trash the whole thing for apparently no reason

a waste of space, in my opinion, and would not recommend it to anyone

for version 0.0.3

Overall a good game. pacing, writing and visuals is all well done. the only reason I didn't give 5 stars is because of minor quality of life things. The foundation is solid and if it's built upon I'm sure this game is a 5/5

For the bar mini game, it's annoying to press the small circle, maybe make this a button as big as the text?
it seems certain passages (going to aunt's house and pressing return) skip time while this is not ideal. I'm not sure if it's a bug
near the end I was just skipping through to see the right character, maybe make the characters show up more, or make the agenda so that it skips right away to that time.

I would recommend trying this game out, especially since there is a browser version available.

Version 0.0.1 Review
Wow, for a first release version I'm extremely impressed.

Writing: 8/10
The writing is pretty good, with a well used but decently incorporated trope of memory loss.

Content: 8/10
There is a surprising amount of content for a first release. Didn't take very long with a bit of cheating (not necessary, the job gives you plenty of money) but more than some first releases.
There are clearly defined "end of content" markers.

Continuity/Actresses: 10/10
The story follows a fairly linear progression, but inside that you have plenty of room to go at your own pace and decide which girl to work with and when.

Actresses are consistent throughout. There is no "generic brunette scene" type of thing. There are "generic characters" however, but even they are consistent. There is currently a rework in progress of one actress the dev has acknowledged.

UI: 9/10
Easy to use. Information is presented as needed. Clean. Clear. Only suggestion I have is to put a portrait of who is where at any given time over the locations.

I'll mention here the bug of time passing when leaving a location, but it doesn't affect gameplay all that much. Just a quirk I got used to quickly. As long as it gets fixed in the next release, I wasn't bothered by it.

Overall: 8.75/10 (35/40)
I'm probably missing some good points here, but I feel this is already getting long. I am looking forward to more. Good first release.

Version 0.0.1 Review:
Well, for a guy smart enough to get into med school, I'm kind of an idiot. Assuming I don't actually remember the events of the intro, some spirit in my head is telling me that if I fuck my family, he'll give me memories back. Well, not quite. He says I'll find out who I am - Which is NOT the same promise. Again, I'll give some credit here -if the amnesia is total then I guess this dude doesn't remember however many stories and books warn you about the careful wording when dealing with the supernatural.

That said, let's move on to the gameplay, plot criticisms in a porn game are whatever. First, anytime you move, it advances time, whether you do anything or not. This is... slightly off putting, and you could easily pass quite a bit of time without any plot advancement. There's no real clue as to where to go or how to progress the story at this point. I can easily see how the other reviewer hit 60 days in a short period of time.

Just currently there's not a lot here. Some core gameplay improvements I think are necessary before this goes much farther.

The actors chose cool heroines. But I didn’t like that there were only 3 times of day. I played for 6 minutes, and I’m already 54 days into the game. You just walk into a room and time passes. The quality of the video clips is also low. I hope the project won't be abandoned.