VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Star Zone [v0.04] [Astar Creation]

Writing is no good! renders are fine but still not great by any stretch.
overall the game just leaves a bad taste in your mouth for some reason and has no real redeeming futures that I could notice.

(Note for the Dev. Work on the story telling aspect and make sure it makes sense and make sure your characters feel like they could be real, because what we are left with is a story that is subpar and characters that do not feel real at all.

V 0.2.5 REVIEW -
In one word terrible game
Only positive is its renders and female models , apart from it nothing is good or stands out the story which is abyssmal and writing is simply bad and the charecters are worst especially the main charecter in the game who is probably the idiotic and worstt written among the games that I played . In short avoid this game atleast till v 0.2 .5 it's too bad to play .

This is one of those games where the plot is beyond retarded and since its english is also so-so, might be tiring to play it. You would think it is a cash grab but renders are average at best, plus its something fishy with the game, my gpus stays at 99% while ingame. Overall its one of those games you just unren to see what it is about.

Version. 0.2.5
This isn't a game worth your time or bandwidth, it's really, really bad. Don't know how anyone could/should say otherwise. It fails on every front that makes a porn game good or interesting/worth playing. It's pointless.
Story. Read the synopsis, that's about as deep a story you're going to get. It's shallow/boring, has no hook or characters that draw you in, plus the main character may be the worst writing protagonist I've ever had the misfortune of playing as. He sucks yack balls so bad .
Verdict. This is still a game early in development, but I honestly cannot see the story or characters progressing or evolving enough to warrant a second playthrough. Final rating. 1/10

review version 0.2

There is nothing really Top in this game, but it's also far away from the worst games over here.
The renders are average, the setup is kind of unique (reason why you moved in)
The girls promise to have a lot of fun with, especially the lonely mom and the hot black neighbor.
I couldn't experience the earlier mentionned horrible english - maybe the proofreading really did the job.
I thought a lot about giving 2 or 3 stars, but as there can't be 0 stars, i decided to give 3 (exact middle between 1 and 5).
Let's see where this goes by the next updates.