HTML - Starlust Echo [Rework v0.1] [Onishin]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    DontWeinsteinThis

    A showcase of a few working links and then nothing more.
    The story (and subsequently the artwork) is all AI gen'd, none of it really makes sense nor does it tie together. If you want to play this "game", just use a chatbots response to a query of this premise and it'll be the same result.

    All in all: Nothings here except AI writing and AI art.
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    namastesta

    so after the rework, it has approximately the same, maybe more content? its been de-starwarsified. its an interesting world, but there is nothing there right now.

    it needs to be 4-5x in size before it gets a decent rating. at this point, there is nothing there.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    her_ecstasy

    Pretty good experience of reading smut text for 15-20 mins. The developer takes the writing seriously, and well-written female protagonist games are something I always enjoy. Also, secret-service badass fighter woman having to engage in sex work is a genre that never ever gets old. Got Female Agent vibes from this one.

    My only gripe is that the prose felt too flowery, and kinda pretentious, at times. For example- "The small room, sparse and silent, feels as though it’s holding its breath." The developer overuses metaphors, at times. But other than that, I enjoyed everything.

    Excited to see what the author comes up with next.