VN Ren'Py Completed Stay Online [v1.0] [LadyLana]

[Frankbob]

Hopefully next update isn't the last, the sharing/hotwife route still has more content to give!

 

[elbro]

How did you come to this conclusion?

If you end the call, you don't see what Julia is doing with Markus. Then, when you hang up after a while, the camera sees movement and alerts you. At that point, you can check the camera and see the cheating. Before that, you don't see it.

So, on the next call, it's logical that a husband who sees his wife being unfaithful for the first time should confront the situation, but he doesn't. (for a moment I didn't think about answering because I thought you were trolling me )

 

[Filipis]

So the first picture is the only one that allows you to catch her cheating and confront her on it by continuing to watch(so far)

The rest of the scenes I'm on the fence around what they fit under so if you go down the route that the MC is into it and she's into it I didn't find her descriptions of the acts overly strong , but on the other side she does have freedom ( I assuming as long as she informs the husband first) but this feels off like she goes off and does what she wants without checking first then gives the husband shit descriptions and maybe one picture , so is it hotwife, is it cuck , is it cheating or has she found a to "cheat" while being a hotwife , I suppose the most annoying part of it is you've been given all the freedom all you have to do is let him know/ask and you can't even be bothered to do that

Problem is, it's clearly NTR since MC didn't give Julia permission to sleep with Marcus on that path - which is why she lies about going to bed early at the start of 0.9.

It's supposed to be NTR, yet we have no NTR reactions from the MC.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Problem is, it's clearly NTR since MC didn't give Julia permission to sleep with Marcus on that path - which is why she lies about going to bed early at the start of 0.9.

It's supposed to be NTR, yet we have no NTR reactions from the MC.

i get that which is annoying because shes been given all the freedom to do what she wants really on the NTS path she only has to ask , but shes to lazy to do so and then it becomes NTR

its being portrayed as a " its easier to ask for forgiveness than to get permission" situation which isnt the case with it being the NTS route so i don't know why its went this way.... unless the plan is to go from hotwife to cuck by cheating which would be absolutely ridiculous

 

[Adhdclassic]

I know he reveals she is cheating after the card game. Does he reveal he knows she cheated in the hallway curious due to he shows no sign of interest in her doing it with Marcus?

Edit:
After looking at the comments guess he doesn't. Is there a chance when he returns there is going to be consequences, maybe what we wanted when he caught her in the beginning and got no real consequence. A more detail consequence with this path more possible he's letting her dig her own grave.

 

[FatYoda]

I dont know why devs of these NTS long distance phone games have the girls always fucking the same guy all the time. The easiest way to lose a girl in a long distance open relationship is to let her spend all her time with the same man. The things they are saying to each other when they dont know he's watching and the things she says when she's talking to him it's obvious they are already getting attached...and letting her form an attachment to another man is a bad fuckin idea. It needs to just be about sex or your relationship is already over.

 

[Dessolos]

I dont know why devs of these NTS long distance phone games have the girls always fucking the same guy all the time. The easiest way to lose a girl in a long distance open relationship is to let her spend all her time with the same man. The things they are saying to each other when they dont know he's watching and the things she says when she's talking to him it's obvious they are already getting attached...and letting her form an attachment to another man is a bad fuckin idea. It needs to just be about sex or your relationship is already over.

and usually the guy sucks ass . Like I hate Marcus and want her just to fuck Jacob instead in the next update

 

[FatYoda]

So the first picture is the only one that allows you to catch her cheating and confront her on it by continuing to watch(so far)

The rest of the scenes I'm on the fence around what they fit under so if you go down the route that the MC is into it and she's into it I didn't find her descriptions of the acts overly strong , but on the other side she does have freedom ( I assuming as long as she informs the husband first) but this feels off like she goes off and does what she wants without checking first then gives the husband shit descriptions and maybe one picture , so is it hotwife, is it cuck , is it cheating or has she found a to "cheat" while being a hotwife , I suppose the most annoying part of it is you've been given all the freedom all you have to do is let him know/ask and you can't even be bothered to do that

you realize there is a completely NTS path? if yo make the right choices you can talk to her about it before she fucks around with Markus on dart night and then she leaves her phone on so you can watch the blowjob and she ttells you all about the night she fucked markus the next day.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

I dont know why devs of these NTS long distance phone games have the girls always fucking the same guy all the time. The easiest way to lose a girl in a long distance open relationship is to let her spend all her time with the same man. The things they are saying to each other when they dont know he's watching and the things she says when she's talking to him it's obvious they are already getting attached...and letting her form an attachment to another man is a bad fuckin idea. It needs to just be about sex or your relationship is already over.

Honestly it's not even that annoys me the most it's the fact that when it becomes a long distance relationship after about two weeks of the partner leaving they are just like well may as well fuck someone else now , they are just set to have no aspect of self control when left unattended for a short period of time it's just fucking strange like if the time window was longer I could see it but it's always a super short turn around to when they start cheating

 

[Dessolos]

Honestly it's not even that annoys me the most it's the fact that when it becomes a long distance relationship after about two weeks of the partner leaving they are just like well may as well fuck someone else now , they are just set to have no aspect of self control when left unattended for a short period of time it's just fucking strange like if the time window was longer I could see it but it's always a super short turn around to when they start cheating

porn logic but yeah alot of these games things happen a little to quickly I find and not enough actual conversations with the wife about said topic.

 

[FatYoda]

Honestly it's not even that annoys me the most it's the fact that when it becomes a long distance relationship after about two weeks of the partner leaving they are just like well may as well fuck someone else now , they are just set to have no aspect of self control when left unattended for a short period of time it's just fucking strange like if the time window was longer I could see it but it's always a super short turn around to when they start cheating

Right...they portray this as a good/happy relationship and she steps out on him after a couple weeks just cause another guy has to sleep at the house for a few nights...she's either a whore, or they weren't happy when he left. This story needed to have started months after he left if she's going to cheat like that. I kinda like this game, but i hate when devs use the same guy in an NTS story the whole time. She needs to kick Markus to the curb before she gets attached because watching her catch feelings is not NTS. It's clearly an NTR game that they've just tacked an NTS aspect to as an afterthought thinking that all she needs is permission for it to be NTS. If she continues to spend time with Markus that isn't just fucking next update i'm out. They shouldn't even sleep in the same bed after sex...well, that's not necessarily true...but if they're cuddling MC is straight fucked.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

porn logic but yeah alot of these games things happen a little to quickly I find and not enough actual conversations with the wife about said topic.

i know , dont even start me on the slutty friend of the female that happens to stumble across your porn history and then makes it her personal mission to push the girlfriend/wife into cheating or talking/pushing the MC into sharing .... my god am i bored of seeing that

 

[FatYoda]

i know , dont even start me on the slutty friend of the female that happens to stumble across your porn history and then makes it her personal mission to push the girlfriend/wife into cheating or talking/pushing the MC into sharing .... my god am i bored of seeing that

all the most popular games in the NTS genre the couple started things themselves and don't have some outside influence trying to drive them into this path, and yet all these new games want to do is throw outside influences in and have them ruin shit. This is how NTR relationships start...not NTS. Yet another reason NTS is obviously just an afterthought to try and draw a larger audience. It wouldn't have been that hard for them to write two paths early and have him initiate it first and the friend come in later and be like hell yeah i can help with this...and that'd be fine...it would have been one extra conversation and the NTS fans would be a lot happier. Except that he should only be coming around a couple times a week and he should be there for like an hour, get laid, and then get bounced.

 

[O1duvai]

porn logic but yeah alot of these games things happen a little to quickly I find and not enough actual conversations with the wife about said topic.

There are several similar games right here and in the comments to them you will find a lot of messages on the topic of "when is the action?!" This problem has two sides, the first is holding the screen without any actions for 2-4 patches (and this is 2-4 months), the second you described, when there is something to hold, but it is dragged in by snot.
Choose, blue or red? And don't forget that not all authors are experts in storytelling. That's how people learn.

 

[FatYoda]

There are several similar games right here and in the comments to them you will find a lot of messages on the topic of "when is the action?!" This problem has two sides, the first is holding the screen without any actions for 2-4 patches (and this is 2-4 months), the second you described, when there is something to hold, but it is dragged in by snot.
Choose, blue or red? And don't forget that not all authors are experts in storytelling. That's how people learn.

no that's not what we mean...this story the guy has only been gone a few days when it happens. They should have had this start several months after he was gone, she hasn't had time to get lonely and horny yet and the NTS story should have been started by the MC and not pressured into it by the wife's friend, so this story feels like she's just a whore who needs cock constantly adn the MC is just along for the ride. Which for an NTR story is perfectly fine, but the NTS storyline is just bad.

 

[O1duvai]

no that's not what we mean...this story the guy has only been gone a few days when it happens. They should have had this start several months after he was gone, she hasn't had time to get lonely and horny yet and the NTS story should have been started by the MC and not the wife's friend, so this story feels like she's just a whore who needs cock constantly adn the MC is just along for the ride. Which for an NTR story is perfectly fine, but the NTS storyline is just bad.

1. Why can't the wife's friend serve as a catalyst? Is there some kind of stereotype on this topic? Absolutely any process can be launched under external influence.
2. Do we know how often they fu&ked before and how often the friend pestered her brain with hints? All this could be in something like a prologue, but personally I don't see the need for it. You are trying to cram abstract characters into the framework you created.

I don't really understand why so actively drag in some anchors from reality to fictional stories. For example, the one about attachments. Okay, if you really want to, write this advice on Patreon if you want author to develop as a writer. In all other cases, all this looks even stranger than sex after five days.

 

[FatYoda]

1. Why can't the wife's friend serve as a catalyst? Is there some kind of stereotype on this topic? Absolutely any process can be launched under external influence.
2. Do we know how often they fu&ked before and how often the friend pestered her brain with hints? All this could be in something like a prologue, but personally I don't see the need for it. You are trying to cram abstract characters into the framework you created.

All i'm saying is that if a sharing/swinging relationship starts and proceeds like this IRL it's almost definitely doomed. The MC was NOT ready, and she's spending all her time with the same man and getting attached. Even when they aren't fucking they are together. The MC has no control what so ever, this is far more reminiscent of a forced NTS/NTR relationship than one in which both parties are happy with it. She is clearly going to do whatever she wants and MC can either be happy about it or get NTR'd. That's not the kind of story most NTS fans are looking for it so it's kind of pointless to even add it.

 

[O1duvai]

All i'm saying is that if a sharing/swinging relationship starts and proceeds like this IRL it's almost definitely doomed. The MC was NOT ready, and she's spending all her time with the same man and getting attached. Even when they aren't fucking they are together. The MC has no control what so ever, this is far more reminiscent of a forced NTS/NTR relationship than one in which both parties are happy with it. She is clearly going to do whatever she wants and MC can either be happy about it or get NTR'd.

The answer to this claim is also hidden in the game format. Phone.
Sharing, for example, implies participation. Right according to the dictionary.

Just open the window, she's not writing a sexology textbook.

 

[FatYoda]

The answer to this claim is also hidden in the game format. Phone.
Sharing, for example, implies participation. Right according to the dictionary.

Just open the window, she's not writing a sexology textbook.

sharing does not imply participation...if i loan my ps5 to someone for a few days I'm not participating, but i'm absolutely sharing. Swinging however....that DOES require participation....and that is tagged here BTW and there isn't any of it.

 

[FatYoda]

The answer to this claim is also hidden in the game format. Phone.
Sharing, for example, implies participation. Right according to the dictionary.

Just open the window, she's not writing a sexology textbook.

it's quite easy to do an NTS phone game in the correct way. She's always keeping him in the loop, always sharing pics and videos, never hiding things, always asks permission and if he has a problem she shuts it down until he's ready. In this game she's just doing shit and he's either ok with it or he's not. This game is just NTR with permission. But I'm not gonna keep bitching here, it is what it is and i'm sure the dev is gonna do what he wants so it's w/e.