VN - Ren'Py - Steps into Corruption [v0.1d] [OnePlayerForge]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    Danjuro83

    Okay, so this game has potential, no doubt! The art style is killer and super recognizable for anyone into mature comics. The h‑scenes are generally well‑animated and pretty steamy, so hopefully they keep that up. My main issue is with how the story starts...

    Spoiler alert!

    ...It feels rushed, and it seems like she's (the MC's wife) the one in control of the relationship, which leans more toward cuck than the sharing/swinging vibe I'm looking for. I get that the MC and his wife mention in a quick convo that they agreed to try new things, but I’d honestly rather see that scene instead of just hearing about it in passing, and it’d be great if the player could actually choose whether the MC is the dominant one or if it’s his wife. Plus, the best friend just showing up at the MC's house and the MC’s wife walking around pantsless and flirting with him (even though he has no clue they’re thinking about opening their relationship) is kinda awkward because it all happens so fast at the start, leaving you totally confused.

    The transitions between scenes are also kinda jarring
    and need more context to flow better, otherwise it just feels like a bunch of h‑scenes with no real story. A lot of successful netorase AVNs do a great job making you connect with the characters, which isn’t really happening here because we don’t get much background on the MC, his wife, or his best friend. How did the MC and his wife meet? Why is Mark the MC’s best friend? When did they realize they wanted to try new things? Have they done it before? Who’s actually the dominant one in the relationship? If they both agreed, why does the MC seem so insecure? These are the kinds of questions that should be answered, and honestly, adding more context would make the whole experience way more satisfying.

    In short, if the devs polish up those missing parts, this game could be amazing. Give it a shot and see what you think though! Btw, I didn’t see any ads while playing. Peace!
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    VIKINGO MIRON

    Gentlemen, a round of applause for the creator who listened to the community and made quick and extremely positive changes.

    *Lisa's body is wonderful and perfectly proportioned.

    *The animations are fantastic, lengthening and bringing the central scene to life.

    *I don't know if I mentioned it in my previous comment, but I really like the music that accompanies the game.

    *And to this I add what the game already had going for it, like the concept, the dialogue, Jason's thoughts, and the expressions of desire on Lisa and Mark's faces.

    Thanks again to the creator, and I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 2.
    Now, 5 stars. :cool: :p :devilish: (y)
  3. 1.00 star(s)

    Edison_666

    A potentially good game is completely ruined by ads that constantly cover part of the screen, and in addition, a forced ad that covers the entire screen pops up every minute. I can't recommend it because the constant ad spam makes the game almost unbearable.
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    Genki-Gudon

    honest review, the game is still at the beginning phase which understandably enough short. gameplay is very direct.. Straight reading, story plot is unclear, no voice actor, no setting. not much to say beside hoping it will be better on the next update. overall, SOLID 3