v0.1-Prologue
It's not that bad. Non-special returning home trope though.
Writing
It's a weird intro since it bares so much similarity, in models and names of models, to another super popular game here. unlike that one, she's your mom here? idk it wasn't outright said yet. i'm all for reinterpretations so this isn't a prob for me. otherwise, the writing is fine, pacing is great. the story is simple and focused around amelie
It's pretty good as an erotic preview but fishy with the development practices, i.e. blueball your audience when you have little to show in content, lack of committing to sfx, and it's sus not even giving any credit to works that heavily inspired your reinterpretation.
But all this is too soon to judge. More please, sir.
It's not that bad. Non-special returning home trope though.
Writing
It's a weird intro since it bares so much similarity, in models and names of models, to another super popular game here. unlike that one, she's your mom here? idk it wasn't outright said yet. i'm all for reinterpretations so this isn't a prob for me. otherwise, the writing is fine, pacing is great. the story is simple and focused around amelie
Content
- phat ass white milf
. pretty much the prologue for me. but i was disappointed mc barely ogled her ass - he was the opposite towards her chest. - only clothed tease rn
- blueballing the end scene
- bug: missing image
- high quality renders
- animation could use some work, the rendering too (didn't match with the image)
- amelie is not as gorgeous as i expected. her face isn't as sharp as i'd have liked but it's trivial.
- bodywise: she extra thick now. her proportions are leaning towards uncanny bimbo BUT butt; a lot of ass that was sculpted well. for all the horrors of DAZ big-ass i've seen, this is not close. it looks great.
- kylie however, looks ugly but idc, it's about amelie for me
- variety in bgm
- very limited sfx. i love voice sfx, makes it more visceral
- unfortunate, and suspicious, it was not used in the yoga scene
It's pretty good as an erotic preview but fishy with the development practices, i.e. blueball your audience when you have little to show in content, lack of committing to sfx, and it's sus not even giving any credit to works that heavily inspired your reinterpretation.
But all this is too soon to judge. More please, sir.