[Ren'Py] Stolen Destiny [Demo v2.0] [Liebrio]

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Liebrio

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Feb 6, 2019
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#41
Um, okay. I saw your comments.
This is not my topic, so I can not replace the files.
I have already written to the admin, I hope he will download the edited version. But I can't be sure when this will happen.
On Patreon, I have already replaced the demo. You can download from there.
But you can simply change the language of the game in the settings. There will be no difference.
P. S. Please write your opinion about the English translation. I used machine translation, so I can’t be 100% sure that it’s accurate. Do you have any misunderstandings? Or just the text sounds weird but understandable.
 

ssrrxxbr

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Oct 20, 2017
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#42
when I see a voyeurism tag automatically comes to my head a door (bathroom/bedroom) and the option Peek..
 

ThunderRob

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#48
the dames are hot..the game itself is another navigate rooms yawn....and..the one scene early in the intro had me shouting OH HELL NO!!! alas...unless it has truly outstanding writing like PT and B and a couple others..i'm not interested in another navigate rooms game...
 

Canto Forte

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#50
Male badgers and badger milkers (badger mating program) would disagree.
Also about the badger plot ...
A male badger is called a boar and the female is called a sow. Young badgers are cubs.
Badgers are largely nocturnal. In winter, badgers do not hibernate but reduce their activity during periods of cold weather. Badger activity increases at the start of the main mating season.
Badgers live in a system of interconnected tunnels and chambers called a sett. Every badger clan has one main sett, which is used for breeding and is usually relatively large. Well-established setts have been excavated by several generations of badgers, with some setts known to be occupied for centuries. [ so says The Department of Agriculture, Environment and Rural Affairs (DAERA) ]

There you have it : game name DAERA (acronym to anything you like). game feature: multiple door to door interactions with various females of various ages, statures, kinks. Side quests: find the ancestral drawings of multiple generations adding to and refurbishing every room. Game : charm the girls during day time, mate during the night - correspondent of the level of wooing done daily.
This game ... is about linx and their mating season human parody (Dev linx in a hoodie is also the game launcher icon)
1-first watch some linx mating habits and rituals watch?v= G4ewNJ77xT8
2-second, game is about saving human kind by taking morning exercising to better your stamina and practicing fire in the hole ritual afterwords :)
Best picture now is literally the quit game screen - try it.
A lot of mistaken identity in the dialogue - he in stead of she.
Worst dialogue is the morning chat by the stove. It does not make sense in any language whatsoever. Room mates in a dorm in high school do not even talk like that.
Most annoying is the update pun everywhere ... even before and after you advance in the game ... you literally never know what is and what is not there.
 
Aug 25, 2017
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#51
Absolutely love the character models, like the redhead is gorgeous! I haven't tried the yet though, will hold off till version one or two.
 

Hermit76

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Apr 15, 2018
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#52
I don't understand all the critics - yes, the language could be and here and there also should be better. But there are several very good looking girls, the story is much more interesting than some guys here almost made me believe beforehand, and if the gameplay becomes a bit more intuitive - some icons make no sense, text buttons might be better - then this can become quite a good game. I am looking forward to more. :)
 
Feb 12, 2018
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#53
The girls look very sexy. And the premise is mysterios and interesting. I wonder what is going on with these scientists.

Can you do anything else than peek in the rooms and massage Jane's feet in the demo?
 
Apr 30, 2018
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#55
I think it's really not bad.
There`s nothing new in this, but i believe it`s also very hard to find new Plots/Models/Mechanics ...

Renders are pretty good.
Click threw Rooms is not my Favorite.
Is it a Grind-Game? Let's wait 1-2 Updates.


Things i would Change or Implement:

- A Hint/Quest System
- Portraits at the Rooms so you can see who is at which Room
- Money / Inventory at the "Normal" Screen, not in PC


The English is ok. Some Sentences seemed a little weird. But i`m not english myself, so i wouldnt do better ^^



P.S. How to use the Champagne?
I thought about drinking it with Mom after the Bath-Peeking (Changeing her Mood) but i can just go to sleep after that!?
 

Hermit76

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Apr 15, 2018
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#57
Because I was asked, just to make some things clearer:
- The button when lying in bed at the morning that looks like a clock and means "stand up" rather implies "set your alarm clock". A button with the text "stand up" would be clearer. A better symbol would be fine, too, but that could be a bit tricky.
- The button one the left of it with the drops and means "masturbate" rather implies "have a shower". A symbol with a spurting penis or one where a hand holds it might be clearer.
- The button for "go to work" is hardly to understand, especially placed in the MC's room. I think that would be better solved by adding an office room to the room bar at the bottom. The player needs to know that he is leaving the apartment now.
- Buttons which will have to effect are a little bit frustrating. Why are there buttons for opening a door when the door is locked? And why is there an option to stand up in the evening when the MC is too tired? If there is not option then no button is needed.

- "soap operas and stupid shows come from the era of this box": If you want to express that the shows and soap operas are as old as the TV, then this could rather be ", coming from the era of this box"

Of course symbols can be independend from the language, which is a good idea. But they also can be rather irritating than helpful.
Language corrections are a bit more difficult because sometimes it isn't completely clear to me, what the meaning is supposed to be. But that may be my problem, since I am no native speaker. And I would have to replay the game... ;)

I hope these hints are helpful.
By the way, it seems that buying the champagne only works properly if you do it in direct combination with looking after how to handle a locked door instead of going to work - and in the morning. If you did not google it right before or right after buying the champagne, you cannot put it into the fridge. But that prevents you from going to work, because doing these two things together in the evening does not have any effect either.
 

Liebrio

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Feb 6, 2019
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#58
Hermit76
-The interface will be reworked, depending on the players ' feedback.
As for buttons... I'll consider replacing them with text buttons. In any case, I will replace those that can be confusing.
-"go to work" button is "map", just in demo 1 there are no other options where you can go)
-Evening dialogue'll rewrite, thank you)
-Yeah, you can't go to work on the same day and put champagne in the fridge.
But you can put more than one bottle.
And it will not disappear until you call the associated event.

Thank you very much for such a detailed answer!
 
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Pablo Gonzalez

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Mar 8, 2018
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#59
These incest games need more family members to fuck like a sexy grandmothers or horny cousins. Maybe even half siblings just something a little different than just mother/sister constantly.
 

Hermit76

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Apr 15, 2018
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#60
Hermit76
-The interface will be reworked, depending on the players ' feedback.
As for buttons... I'll consider replacing them with text buttons. In any case, I will replace those that can be confusing.
-"go to work" button is "map", just in demo 1 there are no other options where you can go)
-Evening dialogue'll rewrite, thank you)
-Yeah, you can't go to work on the same day and put champagne in the fridge.
But you can put more than one bottle.
And it will not disappear until you call the associated event.

Thank you very much for such a detailed answer!
My pleasure! I can confirm that adding several bottels works. At first it was a bit confusing, since there is no visible inventory. But I think I could add as many as I bought, so it seems the internal inventory works. (y)
 
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