VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Stories of Submission eNTeR the cuck [Final] [Zee Vital]

I forgot to rate this one. Played it awhile ago but what I remember its a very hardcore NTR story. It has alot of humiliation in it. The main character of the story is whiny and if you can get past that then this game is very good.

I should have taken consider of the description given. Damn, whole the time I was just pressing my enter and space to complete this one. I like femdom very much and ntr also give me hots. But this one is just utter worst. Only an eunuch can complete this one without losing his sanity

A well made visual novel that delves deep into themes of femdom and cuckolding in a refreshing way. Two things stood out that sets it apart from a lot of similar themed stories; first it's the GF that introduces these things into the relationship (with gusto), rather than the cuck doing it, and the second is that while the cuck is typically pathetic and spineless, he isn't two dimensional and his motivations for going along with it are complex and believable. This leads to the game walking a fine line between the central relationship being consensual and kinky , and just plain abusive and emotionally manipulative (on the part of the GF). This will either be a huge turn on or a huge turn off, depending on your disposition.

The CGs were great but story could have used some work. I would have liked to see the more positive sides of the relationships in this story, but they just came across as very psychologically abusive which isn't very interesting nor was it particularly fun to read. The characters are in deeply damaging and abusive relationships but it's being written as if it's not 'really' abusive and the males are just fine with being less than nothing in the lives of the people they care for and the women do 'really care' about them they just 'show it in a different way'. I just think it could have been done a bit better. Usually in BDSM or Master/Slave relationships there's more to it than just the dominant and submissive characters or fetish play. There's also plenty of, you know, normalcy in these kinds of relationships where people go about normal lives and show affection as you would expect in any vanilla relationship. There is such a thing as laying it (the fetish) on too thick and I think that's what happened here, it was taken to an extreme and stayed there with no cooldown period to make me believe the relationships in it.

Aside from that though, like I said, the CGs are nice, and the sex scenes on their own are enough to bring it up some. The NTR aspect feels a little forced, I would have certainly preferred more time to see the relationships develop. As it stands I just don't believe the character's relationships and the NTR element feels like it's thrown in there just to have the tag. If this story didn't have William or Alex in it at all and it was just Freyja telling anyone else a story of her exploits in training a woman named Stacy to explore her sexuality the story really wouldn't have changed much whether she had a boyfriend or not. Rather than making me believe that Alex and Stacy cared about each other and the NTR felt more like the writer was trying to direct it towards the reader rather than the character Alex. Which can work, but rather than presenting the story to us as if the reader IS Alex we're clearly given the perspective of we're being told a story about someone else's relationship as it devolves/evolves into something taboo. Which for me just pulls me out of the story and I end up not really caring about what's happening. Alex and Stacy's relationship is simply told to us in narration, we don't see their relationship from before the dom/sub thing starts, so we have no basis to judge on how different the characters are behaving towards each other or why it is significant to them that they changed so much and would still care for each other enough to be happy having this kind of taboo relationship. This same criticism can be levied towards the relationship between Freyja and William. We're just thrust into both situations, William is already a sub and being NTRd, and Alex is also already a sub and being NTRd. I would have liked more depth.

I can tell that this is probably someone's first attempt at this kind of game, and what's here is better than a lot of other western VN porn games. I would like to see more because I think that with practice this developer could improve significantly. The CGs are certainly of high enough quality already to make me hope for more in the future.

There isn't a lot of art but holy hell is the writing exceptional for a game like this. This is definitely one of the better games for this type of fetish, even if it is a bit on the shorter side. The art, while there isn't a lot is also very good.

Am.......... The art is good? Yeah that's pretty much it. It isn't even a game, just a story you click through. You can't even make any choices. We wouldn't want choices because then we would need to get creative. For example we could NOT apologize for reading her messages and thus unlock a more brutal scene or something. Anything really would be an upgrade. I would say that writing is good if it wasn't so boring. Don't bother

Well this one was a tad bit rough, as the story is/was real somewhere in the world.

The Ntr is more Femdom oriented rather than Corruption or Mind Control that most of us are use to in Japanese VNs.

The story starts very unique as the reader is inserted as someone who is unrelated to the main story and is the listener just like those who play it.

The story teller is a Redhead THICC dominatrix named Freyja, who unfortunatley in this game does not have a scene.

The story is as always a girl being bored or tired of her boyfriend and seeking help with it, though this time from a Dominatrix who will push her in to the Cuckold lifestyle direction.

The Cuckold here is an... Douchebag for the lack of a better word, but not an unrepentable one as the story reveals further on. And he has a thing for BDSM of course.

The rest of the story is of course wont be revealed here as I think the writing is good enough to waste a hour or two reading it.

One point of warning though, the 'Bull' here is an African but strangely there are no Interracial mentions except 3 lines in the story. Which is good for some bad for others I suppose.

In short; Writing is GOOD, Scenes are GREAT, Theme is OKAY.

Definetly worth checking out if you are an NTR fan.

So just a heads up, I will criticize the game depending on the story and characters so a little bit of a spoiler warning and a faint sorry for the author as I'm sure they worked on it hard.

When you open up the game it starts off from a different perspective where the dominatrix Freyja tells William about the story of Alex -the spineless cuck- and Stacy -the gf- . All in all it starts fairly unique where Stacy meets Freyja again (again because she used to take sessions from her and she is fairly submissive) then tells her about her bf being a truly hideous person who is basically the opposite of what gf had known about him (poor, hideous, very submissive even though she wanted a dominant men). Then Freyja gives her the contact of our Netori character -some random African American dude who weirdly resembles Childish Gambino- and then things go kind of downhill from there.
Immediately next day we are met with bf finding out about their talks and how his gf is just a pure-bred, next-gen bitch who sends out nudes and acts all slutty to a man they've never talked about, which is a minus for me because I generally like the progression towards being okay with it instead of it going 0 to 100 real quick.
Past that though, our cuck protagonist is absolutely furious, livid even. It's a natural reaction even though he is quite the slimy guy, I dig his feelings though. Then gf comes back and acts normal while our protagonist gives away that they searched through her phone in which she reacts bitchy and cold to him despite him trying to salvage the situation and act dominant -and lo and behold, he fails miserably- .
Moving on to the next couple of scenes I was actually expecting some sort of good reaction out of this guy because he really, really disliked the concept of cheating. Though it turns out he is just a wimp, who has achieved nothing in their lives and are as useful as a potted plant. Take note authors/game creators, not many people are into forced, weirdly implemented clueless/hopeless situtations where they just watch and can't do anything about it. Atleast give a simple selection where I can just man up once my life and dump her ass right there instead of having to listen through her bullshit because I'm weak. The girl in question didn't even have blackmail material to work into him, he was just wimpy enough to listen to some yelling but I get it, I really do. The story is about someone who is just a failure in life, though I doubt they wanted to live like that. Past that, I don't think it's good for the story either, while there being no ground for a certain plot definitely contributes to the lifeless story it contains.
Okay, despite all that lets get to the CG and game mechanics.

CG is actually pretty decent. No low-effort 3D rendering which is generally good and it seems like the assets were original? I haven't searched it up so I'll clear this once I am sure its not stolen or anything. While the art is good, it certainly lacks some aspects for people. This game is fairly vanilla despite the implied BDSM (which is zero to none unless you consider that 1 out of the possible 6-7 image is focused on that) and I think that's why the art just stands there as... actual art . Props on the "married snowbunny" CG though, I really like the art style there and wish we had more opportunity to see stuff like that.
When it comes to game mechanics though. Don't get your hopes up 'cause you only get to choose twice as it's a fairly short game but I'm sure the author probably could've implemented more choices if they deemed so. It would be better to classify this as "interactable short" although I don't think this ruins the game at all, since it is focused to be story-rich.

Well, to conclude everything I've said I would like to, again, say that I appreciate the effort and love put into this. I wouldn't want this to discourage the author but rather inspire as I believe we all learn from our mistakes (this is open to discussion though since for the author this could be their masterpiece). Other than that, I would've loved if this was a wee-bit longer, even if it only meant couple paragraphs and no CG.

In Total:

Story: 3/5
CG: 4/5
Gameplay: 2/5
Satisfaction Beating the "Game": 3/5

TL;DR: Game is okay, story is kind of dull, CG could've been more and a bit more catered to different kinks, It's more a story slideshow rather than a game.

Plot = 5/5
Genre ( Including NTR ) = 5/5
Artwork = 3/5
Erotism = 5/5
Scenes = 3/5
Overall = 4/5

keep up the good work.

How much you enjoy it depends on how much you enjoy femdom.

Personally speaking it's not for me, since it's the type of dom/sub story where all the people are in their personas all the time, with zero aftercare or hints of a life outside of being a "dom" or a "sub".

But, it's a work of fiction, a fantasy. Certainly no more offensive than any of the incest, peeping, dub-con and outright rapey stuff you see in a lot of other popular games. People who like this kink would likely enjoy it.