There is a lot of good here. A lot of variety in personalities, body types, facial features, etc. The animations are good, renders are good, story premise isn't too bad as there hasn't been too many with it. The fact that the creator put so much work into the first release is huge in my opinion. I like the lap top idea and is interesting, but see the ugly below.
The parts that are bad... PAIGE looks horrible. I don't know how this doesn't have a harem tag. I will have to wait to see how the vision of the author unfolds. The dick, it looks more like a dildo than a dick.
The ugly .... the dialogue. It's so bad I almost rated it 3 stars. It's been a long time since I have read so much unnecessary parts and information. It just makes the story more boring instead of adding to the story. There is a reason why books have an editor. Hopefully the next parts will be better.
Edit -- Through day 13. I still think this is really good. It's biggest downfall is still the dialogue. Banter is good because it allows us to learn the others personalities, but there is way too much in this. I can't help, but think that if there was 50% less banter we would be on day 26 instead. Still look forward to updates though.
The parts that are bad... PAIGE looks horrible. I don't know how this doesn't have a harem tag. I will have to wait to see how the vision of the author unfolds. The dick, it looks more like a dildo than a dick.
The ugly .... the dialogue. It's so bad I almost rated it 3 stars. It's been a long time since I have read so much unnecessary parts and information. It just makes the story more boring instead of adding to the story. There is a reason why books have an editor. Hopefully the next parts will be better.
Edit -- Through day 13. I still think this is really good. It's biggest downfall is still the dialogue. Banter is good because it allows us to learn the others personalities, but there is way too much in this. I can't help, but think that if there was 50% less banter we would be on day 26 instead. Still look forward to updates though.