VN - Ren'Py - Strangers on Paper [Ch.2 v0.2.2] [Gloomy Ghost Studio]

Review for Ch. 2 - 0.2.2 .

man. i love this.
i love Becca and i Love Amy. i love every second of this experience.
Renders are Amazing.
The story is also cool but we are only at the beginning so for now it satisfied me.

The branching is also cool but it may not be for everyone.
Before I came across this hidden gem I already thought there is no quality SlowBurn romance stories anymore and here is this miracle.


I will definitely support the developers on patreon and you should too.

the only negative thing I can say is the music. however, this will surely be improved in the next updates.

Everything everyone is saying about this game is true.

Simply put, this game is for people who enjoy high quality - nothing cheap, nothing pandering. Even through two (content-rich) chapters, I have full confidence that this dev knows what they are doing both from a storytelling perspective and an artistic one. The level of writing, characters, and art is some serious professional shit.

And of course, the sexual tension - spoiler about content: The one, unanimated sex scene so far with Becca did more for me than 90% of scenes in other games that are technically solid but ultimately just made for fan service and don't really have real buildup. Those absolutely have their place - but this game is not one of them. This is not a fuckfest harem game and the dev is pretty clear about that. Some might complain about lack of animation - truthfully i'm not even sure animations will fit with this art style and story flow. The devs seem like they are staying true to the story they want to tell, and I love that. This is a game where the focus is more on sexual tension and writing - just know that and set your expectations properly

One of the best AVGNs ive ever played.

The best part of this game is the writing. The characters feel very relatable and very human. I loved how the main character thinks, hes a writer so alot of his exposition is really tacky in a cute kinda way. But both of the girls have unique personalities which makes both routes feel very fresh.

The renders are fucking amazing. Becca has to be the hottest girl ive ever seen in a game. Shes just fucking perfect and i love the detail on her face especially. Her freckle's are so damn beautiful. Somehow they made her hotter in the 2nd episode (god bless you devs). But honestly all the models are great, the main character is hot, and so is the other girl Amy. Alot of the side characters are well done as well.

There are slight issues, but i dont think that any of them take away from my rating. There are some scenes that dont have any audio to them, it just feels a little bit weird considering that most of the game has some sort of background audio and or music. So having some outliers in the sound area does break the immersion a little. Sex scenes were really good, but i could use some more shots of the main characters dick, as there was basically none in the scene.

Great renders, great writing, great screenwriting, great characters. A lot of effort went into the renders, lighting, camera work, additional work on making the characters more unique and lifelike.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ch.2
The highest praise I could ever give one of these games is making me actually enjoy a sex scene; that scene was earned and erotic. This is a beautifully crafted VN with stylized visuals and incredible dialogue. It runs so naturally and has such a deeply intimate feel in every scene. I adore this vibe!! I'm really excited to see where this goes!
Also the DbD reference was very cute

I normally don't rate anything on this site but this is just- you should just try it out.

For someone going through the motions of life, this is for you. For those looking for a quick release, maybe also try it out and be caught up.

Actually great writing and believable lines. The release cadence and slow burn isn't my thing so I'll probably skip releases until there's a sizeable enough chunk, but amazing start so far. Will definitely come back on a full release.

You notice a polished story when you pay attention, it's the case for Strangers on Paper, there is a sign that game is a rare gem when a story can hook you up with a single plot.
I really enjoyed the story and interaction between characters, dialogues and atmosphere feel so realistic and tangible, you can see that writing and depiction of characters are so damn good.
If I want to complain about something probably will be lack of ample amount of choices on each routes and sometimes you can't be sure which decision making desirable result, but it's nitpicking really.
I very recommend Strangers on Paper to broaden your horizon.

Wow, this is good, great even.
I don't usually review games here, but I just have to recommend this.
This is a slow burn story-driven VN without any animation, yet the compelling characters and captivating story make up for all of that and then some.
It took me about 2 hours to finish one of two route, and i consider myself a pretty slow reader.
If you are here for porn, I suggest wait a few more updates, or just wait till full release. Because currently there is only one scene.
But if you're here for the story, stop reading this and go play it.
You won't be disappointed.

TLDR: Amazing writing + beautiful renders = great game

One of the best slice-of-life VNs out there.
I've seen some comments stating this VN is overrated and that it has ugly looking characters (I highly disagree with the latter). And I also know the lack of animations is a dealbreaker for some.
I understand these complaints but I personally just want to be immersed in a good story, with interesting characters and meaningful choices, and this VN delivers just that. Along with the beauty and intrigue of the mundane, seen through the eyes of a writer, a poet. With all the cringe, awkwardness and charm of life.
As someone who loves writing and reading poetry I was extremely happy to experience a story that has elements of poetry and artistic expression woven into the narrative.
All and all, it's an interesting story, with a relatable protagonist, stellar dialogue and immersive moments.
This for me is a 5/5 (no animations required) and I just hope this game continues to the deliver with updates like this latest one.
Despite all of the previous difficulties and delays, I like this project, enough to support it on Patreon and I'm not ashamed to admit it.
Best of luck to the developer, I will keep supporting him for as long as he keeps the train going, and if you're reading this and haven't played it yet, give it a try! TITSOAK

I thought I was getting into some generic visual novel. Instead, I am sucked into this beautiful story between these characters. I love the fact that they feel like people with personal problems and even the MC is well written with depths. The art is so visually stunning with the shot and camera composed makes me more invested in the story.

To sum it up, came in to have a wank, but didn't and instead I stayed for the story 10/10.

If you make it past the intentionally terribly written opening lines - which are, thankfully, diegetic - you'll find an excellent VN. The writing is very good, (outside of a few mediocre lyrics), the characters are excellent, the storylines are very good.
There are, of course, some problems, but nothing that substantially detracts from it. I was very disappointed when I got to the chapter's endings, because I really wanted to continue, which is kind of rare for me.
It's not a wild fuckfest (currently only one real sex scene through two chapters,) so I know some people will be disappointed by that, but if you're willing to experience, like, plot and shit, then this is a great choice.

Dude, I think this is one of the best stories I have seen so far. I can only say thank you fur such a nice work. Don't drop the standard and keep up the good work. Characters are great and the story is really catching! Thank you!

Stylish, well-written, aesthetically pleasing, pretentious. "Strangers on Paper" is walking a thin line between elevating the art form and missing the mark completely. There is substance behind all the style, and the developers deserve the benefit of the doubt, but a development time of over a year for an update that seems relatively sparse leaves a lot of room for improvement.

Characters are written in a manner that allows you to connect with them, and leave you wanting more despite being marred in clichés (Becca). The actual plot serves as little more than a backdrop to write fashionable dialogue and thus far remains without a real hook.

It's a game that's worth checking out for anyone who enjoys flowery prose and is perhaps longing for a more mature take on the genre.

Bought this a couple days ago, decided to support the developers on Patreon. And, holy shit, what a great update.
Don't wanna give away anything spoiler-wise, so I'll just hit general points.
Stylish, emotional, some of the best writing you will find, and visually impressive. Great cast of characters, and I absolutely adore both Becca and Amy.
Two chapters in, this is definitely getting five stars from me, highly recommended, no notes.

Given that this title is under the Adult Games > Games section, I'll be rating it against other AVNs I've played and the content types they present. I am being lenient with it since it only has one chapter so far, and gauging what content an AVN would normally have in Ch 1.

Additionally since it has 38 previous reviews (37 of which are 5-star and one is 4-star) I'll be treating it as the pinnacle of Adult Visual Novels when assessing what it contains. I normally do so anyway by starting a game at 5 stars, and then adding/deducting along the way.

Positives:
++ Amazingly good renders, everything appears life-like
+ Very realistic characters, for the few we get to see so far
++ Perfect English text makes it a very easy read (this coming from an English speaker)
+ Conversations between characters are believable, for their personality types

Negatives:
-- Zero lewd scenes. The entire game (Chapter 1) carries a PG-13 rating at this point with the exception of a few swear words.
-- Zero animations. Not even things like blinking eyes on renders.
--In the first 5 minutes - the MC's best friend destroys the MC's laptop during a gaming session, then puts the MC to work at his bar (a forced plot progression device, and unrealistic in my eyes).
- Phone texts are displayed directly over current render (no phone background or separate UI element)
- Most of Chapter 1 is idle banter - there is zero "plot progression" on the MC's writing.
- Only two Love Interests in the game as of Chapter 1 (on totally separate paths)
- Very short on content - playing both girl's paths via loading a save still only took me ~90 minutes.
----- Game has gone 14+ months without an update (and yes - I do know why).

+/- Impossible to evaluate body types, as none are shown beyond one still of Becca's lower half at the end of Amy's path (still not nude).

Becca's Path:
- Keys "magically" drop onto the car's floor out of the ignition?
--- Zero adult/sexual content. No rated R renders.
- A kiss on the lips is all the MC gets. Two girls are shown kissing each other.

Amy's Path:
- Her hair is perfectly dry despite jumping into a pool head first.
- Totally dry clothes back at the bar (a short walk away from the pool).
- A kiss on the lips is all the MC gets.
- A single blurred nipple can be seen in a still at the end of Chapter 1 (lesbian closeup).

At this stage (Chapter 1), the game doesn't qualify as an "Adult" Visual Novel, as it has no Adult content in it. It may in the future due to the development team's plan, but currently it lacks any of that. At best it is a first date simulator, and as such does a good job of it.

Since I don't rate games based on the concept of "has a lot of promise", but rather "what do they offer right now", Strangers on Paper ends up a 2.9 rating from me. The only reason I'm not dropping it to a 2.5 (which I think it absolutely deserves) is because I can't imagine the dev team will allow it to go much further without actually adding in some type of Adult content. Whether that will be modern smooth animations, or frame flipping, or stills remains to be seen.

Played chapter 1

I thought it felt genuine and fun to play.
Both paths offer very different stories and they are both good!
I find it hard to choose what path I like more, but when updates come out I will for sure play both of them.

I understand why some might think it is lacking in paths. But to me this makes total sense.
The playable content is very good!

About the visuals. They are insane.

Ohhh another media about someone's having a writer's block, eh? Had a fair share of them in movies, TV shows, etc so this will be good. I like the renders, one of the best out there along with Summer Heat. Superb writing too, I don't have any objection. Looks like Strangers on Paper would only have two LIs, but I don't mind since Chasing Sunsets also has two LIs and it's still a great game nonetheless.

Truth to be told, I thought this VN was about something similar like Euphoria because of its color palettes but I'm glad I was wrong. Five stars from me despite it's still in an early stage.

Top of the line introduction. The story is excellent, the characters are well fleshed out, the writing is concise. No typographical errors, excellent grammar. The visuals are compelling and help to enhance each scene. This is a VN that will be wise to watch. Can't wait for a new chapter.

Intensely gripping introduction to all the characters and the stories they undoubtedly will have. Can not wait to see more of this dev.

Sound design is very good as well, with a music that makes you forget it's there and makes you miss when it is not.

Renders are near perfect, though the girls that are not MG's are not up to the same standard as Becca and Amy, though completely understandable