This is one of the few AVN's where it's more lacking in the Adult department than the Visual and Novel elements.
As some other reviewers have touched on, this story more closely resembles traditional visual novels than an actual AVN. The protagonist is mundane, the world is pretty bland, the inter-personal relationships are filled with the average kind of melodrama you'd expect from poor communicators in real life.
One of the main issues with this is that the adult content is not only sporadic, but also feels very random. Whenever a sex scene happens, it feels like it happens out of obligation more than natural progression. The first two sex scenes are with complete strangers on your first interaction, and very much feel like asides or afterthoughts. I understand using one-night stands or FWBs, they can be fun ways to make the world feel more expansive, but THIS AVN feels like it completely pauses the story to have these occur, and they feel like they're filling an obligation than making the story more enjoyable.
Perhaps that's due to the glacial pace of the main story. I mean I don't know about anyone else, but the idea of a co-worker I went on one date with, getting pissy at me for going on one date with another woman, feels pretty fucking ridiculous to me. But also, it's just deeply boring. I mean I don't expect constant drama just thrown at you constantly, but this isn't really an engaging story in the first place.
The writing is...fine? I guess? I mean I don't like the story in general and I think it's pretty boring, but if you do like the story then the dialogue is going to do well with you too. It really does capture the kind of "slice of life" you can find at just about every visual novel on Steam.
As some other reviewers have touched on, this story more closely resembles traditional visual novels than an actual AVN. The protagonist is mundane, the world is pretty bland, the inter-personal relationships are filled with the average kind of melodrama you'd expect from poor communicators in real life.
One of the main issues with this is that the adult content is not only sporadic, but also feels very random. Whenever a sex scene happens, it feels like it happens out of obligation more than natural progression. The first two sex scenes are with complete strangers on your first interaction, and very much feel like asides or afterthoughts. I understand using one-night stands or FWBs, they can be fun ways to make the world feel more expansive, but THIS AVN feels like it completely pauses the story to have these occur, and they feel like they're filling an obligation than making the story more enjoyable.
Perhaps that's due to the glacial pace of the main story. I mean I don't know about anyone else, but the idea of a co-worker I went on one date with, getting pissy at me for going on one date with another woman, feels pretty fucking ridiculous to me. But also, it's just deeply boring. I mean I don't expect constant drama just thrown at you constantly, but this isn't really an engaging story in the first place.
The writing is...fine? I guess? I mean I don't like the story in general and I think it's pretty boring, but if you do like the story then the dialogue is going to do well with you too. It really does capture the kind of "slice of life" you can find at just about every visual novel on Steam.