This novel looks pretty. it looks wonderful. but that's not my focus in this review.
What is important is story. There is this nice 'tv show' feeling in this game (this is a good thing). I enjoyed this intro/story very much.
It gives you hope that maybe, there might be something more in it that simple incest porn.
Translation is not great, there's a lot of broken english. - but I'm not native speaker myself, so I should't judge.
One thing that deeply bothers me is MC's new roommates relationship status:
overview mentions they cousins, but in the game they step sisters - this is strange. But please (that's my personal request for you, Dirty) - do not let them be step family! Cousins or even dad friend's family sound much better and realistic (at least you should consider option to define it yourself, like in some other games - like in SL by Perverteer).
I have to say it, although this is my personal feeling: OMG THERE'S TOO MUCH PINK, IT IS KILLING MY EYES!!!!
Should you play it? Give Dirty, some time to fix english, and then you should try it. This game is an upcoming gem.
Even with not-so-good translation, you can tell a lot of effort has been made.
5 stars as an encouragement to not abandon this project. It is great, so take your time to develop it, and I'm sure we gonna like it
What is important is story. There is this nice 'tv show' feeling in this game (this is a good thing). I enjoyed this intro/story very much.
It gives you hope that maybe, there might be something more in it that simple incest porn.
Translation is not great, there's a lot of broken english. - but I'm not native speaker myself, so I should't judge.
One thing that deeply bothers me is MC's new roommates relationship status:
overview mentions they cousins, but in the game they step sisters - this is strange. But please (that's my personal request for you, Dirty) - do not let them be step family! Cousins or even dad friend's family sound much better and realistic (at least you should consider option to define it yourself, like in some other games - like in SL by Perverteer).
I have to say it, although this is my personal feeling: OMG THERE'S TOO MUCH PINK, IT IS KILLING MY EYES!!!!
Should you play it? Give Dirty, some time to fix english, and then you should try it. This game is an upcoming gem.
Even with not-so-good translation, you can tell a lot of effort has been made.
5 stars as an encouragement to not abandon this project. It is great, so take your time to develop it, and I'm sure we gonna like it