VN Ren'Py Abandoned Student Life [v0.1.5 Beta1] [Veronica]

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Overview:

This story about a student from Eastern Europe whose life path will you choose.
Be an avid party-goer, crammer, or intolerable romantic
Who are you to be? decide for yourself.​

Thread Updated: 2020-11-20
Release Date: 2020-11-20
Developer: Veronica
Censored: No
Version: 0.1.5 Beta1 Public
OS: Windows, Linux, Android, Mac
Language: English
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thokejacac

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The dialog is... not good, both grammatically and in terms of general flow, it's stilted and unnatural. Punctuation is all over the place as well. That being said, the art is gorgeous and the dialog can obviously be fixed, especially at such an early stage. I'm looking forward to checking it out again, good luck dev. :)
 

Lussuria

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Art is pretty good, sounds are nice.

Story and dialogue are both very poor. Pacing feels bad with how quick you have sex with Maya, she is introduced like a potential long term thing but then you fuck her day two. I get you want to show off the art and sounds and what not but in terms of a demo or introduction this doesn't leave me asking questions about what will happen. It all feels rather generic.

Maybe I need to play through it again to see how decisions impacted the game. If they did have an impact on what happens, it wasn't obvious.

Don't let me get you down tho, it has potential.
 
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Evilko

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Ugh, fkin stupid c*nt, they are fucking! Are you blind? "Best friend" my ass... This phrase just killed all my good thoughts about her, definitely will dump her if i ever continue to play this game.
 

frogbert

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Engrish is very hard to read. I'm gonna pass until the dev can find a better translator.
 

lockerxx

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May 10, 2017
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art is fine but could be better the written needs help.it got potential
 

frogbert

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Oct 15, 2018
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Ugh, fkin stupid c*nt, they are fucking! Are you blind? "Best friend" my ass... This phrase just killed all my good thoughts about her, definitely will dump her if i ever continue to play this game.
I'm just impressed you managed to get so involved in this extremely short and unreadable game to get mad about anything at all.
 

XJ347

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Sep 19, 2017
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Am I the only one who think the characters look older than college students? My gut tells me they look 25ish.