VN - Ren'Py - Subject 9 [v0.1] [Kaffekop]

Version .01 reviewed.

A kinky incest story about a young man going through some sort of experimental medical procedure who travels with his mother to a family gathering.

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Pros:

1- Some very nice renders.

2- Horny MILFs and GILFs.

3- Lavish set designs and art style.

4- Titanic titties and 10 pound cocks, if that's your thing.

Cons:

1- Kinetic.

2- Mediocre writing with numerous grammatical errors.

3- Silly story that's way over the top. Right from the start it becomes clear that each family member has the hots for another family member. Even granny made a few lewd comments in her only scene.

Final verdict- Limp biscuit.

I enjoy a good incest story if it has good pacing and appears to be somewhat believable. But this one moves way too fast and is so over the top that the family comes off as certifiable from the start. That said, I'm sure this game will find a niche with those who like unbridled incest, bimbo's with titanic titties and MC's with monster cocks.

If the writing was better and the pacing more subdued and less absurd, this would be a much better game.

Good luck to the dev.

VERSION: 0.1
SUMMARY: Ok, but not good, the plot and premise are the poorly done.
RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. :
4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐
5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐
6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐
7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐
8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐
9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐⭐
10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Decent looking characters overall.
2. Writing is structured and reads well enough.
3. Music and audio is actually not too bad, general audio particularly.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Premise is weird, starts off jarring and sudden with no context.
2. Per above point, its all too unnatural and forced, that the aunt and mother walk around half naked, see the MC and let themselves be seen by him naked is just unnatural. Forget kink when you don't create context and treat it all as the most normal thing ever. Major fail here.
3. LIs interest in the MC and even MC response right off the bat is over the top and nonsensical.
4. UI/UX experience is crap, again a basic setting like dialogue box opacity is missing and God knows why!
5. Lighting around the MCs hair makes him look older, greying, at the sides of his head. This is further compounded with the LIs, his aunt and mother looking the same age as him...another poorly planned item...
6. Spelling errors and some other grammatical issues need revision.
7. No animations of any kind.
8. Too short, little content to get into much of anything with little to no lewd.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• Plot clearly has something to do with this "subject 9" not sure what it is, guessing some experiment and clearly it has to do with the MC being a magnet to woman, even family, but this is executed so poorly (despite this being the plot or not)
• Clearly this AVN has some back story that the player is purposefully not told, we dropped in the deep end and simply have to accept some established narrative and story that makes no sense. That at least is what you would think, but I think its simply a matter of the developer threw this out there and hopes to garner support for a half baked idea that was executed even worse.
• The idea is fine, but the way its setup and plays out is simply BAD. There are scenes that make fuck-all sense and are too random, making the player get whiplash and ask WTF is going on. One moment the MC walks in naked on his mom like its the most natural thing and she accepts it, yet there is nothing going on between them (at least at this point) but the do it all like its common practice. There are too many of these kinds of scenes.

TLDR:

Fair enough AVN, but is more for visuals than story, the plot may be fine, but the execution, how its put/strung together and how it plays out is poorly done IMO. Right now there is very little content, and the developer really needs to rethink this before going further with it.

The story is 4/10 - it is completely ridiculous (as much as it was explained in v0.1) and for some reason his mom and aunt just melt in his presence without any effort from him.

The girls look 6/10 - huge assets but they look very plastic.

Plenty of spelling and grammar errors so it looks like the dev didn't even bother using an AI to proofread and correct.

I should give it 2 stars only, but I liked the previous game even if it was abandoned.