Whilst its cool that you would care enough I wouldn't recommend it, ur likely going to get sued, and if u can draw well enough at that point might as well just make ur own game xDlmao this is funny because i'm going to remaster and fork the SML already.
I've added a darker gradient behind the text which should solve that problem, I don't think the font itself is hard to read thoughgreat art style love it!
maybe more pixels on the dialogue text? slightly hard to read..
Exicted for your first gameQuick update, i'm releasing the demo in almost just a week from now
The shota isn't visually represented as of now the only thing that will be represented of him is penis/parts of body, as for the rest yeah urination will be avoidable and thanks for the feedbackLooks interesting. I'm not really into shota, but it can depend on just how the shota looks and how it's done. Hopefully not too small or short compared to the female interests.
If you can add sexy vocal sfx to the sex animations, that would be my biggest thing. At least, I assume you're doing animations, because of the animated banner.
A little weird that you plan to add MMF, but not FFM. I'd think it would be the other way around, since there are multiple female love interests. Also, some ppl think sharing is caring, but gotta admit I only agree when it's the females doing the sharing, haha.
Hopefully the urolagnia is avoidable, not my cup of tea.
Also, as a stylistic note in the dialogue writing, try to avoid using ellipses ("...") wherever possible. It's ridiculously overused in AVNs, and generally a sign of weak writing.
Otherwise, it looks very cool. I'm wishing you great fortune on this venture!
Yeah, I would concur as well, given the ratio of female LIs vs the lone MC. I'm more of an FFM guy myself, not into sharing my harem with other dudesthat you plan to add MMF, but not FFM. I'd think it would be the other way around, since there are multiple female love interests
That would make the scenes a lot more immersive/compelling in a sense and a lot more sensual as well, if you have some voices in accompanying the animationsadd sexy vocal sfx to the sex animations
Ah, the invisible protagonist. I can't really get into that approach; the closest for me is when it's close-up POV.The shota isn't visually represented as of now the only thing that will be represented of him is penis/parts of body, as for the rest yeah urination will be avoidable and thanks for the feedback
Oh, it's an invisible protag?Ah, the invisible protagonist. I can't really get into that approach; the closest for me is when it's close-up POV.