The animations and scene transitions/cutscenes are awesome, dont change that please.
Story so far is interesting, with a dark backstory slowly coming to the surface. Cant wait to see the next chapter.
I really like how you are introducing the characters and getting me interested in them. It will make fap scenes more emotional when they are finally added.
I hope incest is a tag. The sister dynamic should be explored, perhaps negatively, no one does negative incest relationships, might be interesting and compounding to his woes if he loses the support of his sister for a time.
ui is plain/default... it even has the blank squares on the ends for avatar faces that isnt used. I dont know, it just seems like such a simple way to make your game/story stand out a little, by customizing the ui. I recommend making the text block smaller, so it takes less of the screen, in fact it should automatically be the smallest it can be, and dynamically resize to the text size.
I see multiple sizes and colors of characters, appreciate that. Havent seen anyone fat yet, so still room for improvement.
The humor is good, a bit childish, but not overbearing, so good.
thanks for sharing your hard work, I cant wait to see what you publish next.
Story so far is interesting, with a dark backstory slowly coming to the surface. Cant wait to see the next chapter.
I really like how you are introducing the characters and getting me interested in them. It will make fap scenes more emotional when they are finally added.
I hope incest is a tag. The sister dynamic should be explored, perhaps negatively, no one does negative incest relationships, might be interesting and compounding to his woes if he loses the support of his sister for a time.
ui is plain/default... it even has the blank squares on the ends for avatar faces that isnt used. I dont know, it just seems like such a simple way to make your game/story stand out a little, by customizing the ui. I recommend making the text block smaller, so it takes less of the screen, in fact it should automatically be the smallest it can be, and dynamically resize to the text size.
I see multiple sizes and colors of characters, appreciate that. Havent seen anyone fat yet, so still room for improvement.
The humor is good, a bit childish, but not overbearing, so good.
thanks for sharing your hard work, I cant wait to see what you publish next.