Review based on Ch.2 (out of an expected 20 or so), 6th of January 2020
If you're mostly just horny, this is not your first choice. But if you are in a bit more patient mood, this is truly a goddamn masterpiece with potential beyond anything I've seen so far.
The first two chapters have really laid the groundwork for an intriguing story, with loads of potential for both MC and NPCs.
It doesn't land you in the typical MCs role. Its not a pervy youngster, a pervy "dilf" or Jock-type etc. You are a bit socially inept, you suffer from mental illness to some degree, you are somewhat abrasive, unthoughtful.. but you are at heart a good guy. Having such a colourful variation of qualities, or lack thereof, is what makes him human. Relatable. Real. And the same can be said of the other characters, even if they havent had time to shine through just yet this early on. People have quirks, shortcomings and positive qualities, depth, personality, relability and unlikeability. On a level atleast
I havent seen before in a ren'py, romance/erotic game.
Beyond that, a lot of work has been done graphically and cinematography wise. It's a beautiful game. The short cutscenes between gameplay are just expertly done. The gameplay itself is beautifully rendered. The characters are all every unique and
could actually be real people.
This is artistic craftsmanship. This is real, well thought through writing. This is passion and hard work - and it tells.
Is it perfect? No. But it's goddamn near perfection. My only critique so far is that I at sometimes wanted more choices - the acute example being the ending of ch.2 i got with Victoria - I liked her, and I agreed to a date, but mostly because I like how nice she is and had sympathy for her, and I felt someone the MC could relate to but not necessarily being romantically interested in... but still.. wanted to get to know. However the inner dialogue didnt say that at all. MC almost made it sound like he was in love already? Bit too early considering his qualms over his ex who disapperead.
Including choices determining how he feels during that conversation would be appropriate I feel. Instead the game now assumed I was head over heels, which wasnt anywhere near where my mind was at.
Another one being the fight with the bully, Bella or some such? During the fight where she strangled me, my instinct was to hug her. However MC just bailed like an asshole. Which I guess is true to his character so I dont really mind it nearly as much as the Victoria situation, and I'm somewhat fine with it. Something to ponder for future chapters however. To what degree should MC really have this mind of his own?
*edit - adding voicing to the NPCs and a complete soundtrack would really put a gold star on the whole thing, that might be worth considering in the far future. It's not anything really important. Just a thought, maybe as an addition when the whole thing is finished.
All in all. This game is just great. I'm gonna come back for every single chapter. What you are doing is gods work
